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Hope

Hold on to it...

8 total reviews 
Comment from Liberty Justice
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EXCELLENT poem. You followed the rules perfectly, and I love the way you used the letter "h" in your poem making hope your basic word. I just gave you my thumbs up and you have, now, placed. Good luck! Happiness followed along really well giving your poem spiritual overtone and inspiration. WELL DONE. liberty justice

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

reply by the author on 02-May-2018
    Thank you so much for your kind words! This review made my day, I'm so glad you enjoyed my work. Thank you for your vote, I am honored.
Comment from Harry Smith
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Beautifully written is this poem with volumes of emotions and lots and lots of imagery. The picture selection is just prefect for the poem.

 Comment Written 01-May-2018

reply by the author on 01-May-2018
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from nor84
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I wanted to give you a heads up review. The contest announcement says, "The poem itself has seven lines. The first word in each line begins with the same letter as the title."

I am seeing more than seven lines, and the first word in each line does not begin with the same letter that begins the one-word title.

Perhaps you still have time to fix it.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 01-May-2018
    Thank you for your review and advice. I have made changes to my poem, hopefully it now complies with contest rules.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks glories of hopes, truly hope maybe the greatest feeling one have in life, hope helps one to carry on dreams, hope will fulfil all desires and bring down heaven; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 01-May-2018
    Thank you! :)
Comment from JanPerry
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I like the color highlights and contrasting. As far as hope goes you have repeated your thoughts over too often. Just in different ways.
I realise the h has to carry on to the next line.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 01-May-2018
    Thank you for your review of my work, it is appreciated.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
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Hello, this is a nicely presented poem for the competition and best of luck. I enjoyed this poem about hope, which is so important for our well being. I noticed no errors and would recommend your poem to others for review, Ana.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 01-May-2018
    Thank you for your kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Pleiades Poetry writing prompt.
Your verse gives a clear message.
Well done and good luck to you with this on in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 01-May-2018
    Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, it means so much.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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A great tribute to hope. Yes, once you have hope, many things can happen. You brought it out so well.

Happiness can come from hope,
it makes your heart feel glad.

Loved your optimistic spirit and your wonderful rhymes.

I raise a glass of champagne to hope! (smile).

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 01-May-2018
    Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed my work. Everyone needs hope. :)