Comment from Joan E.

Exceptional

What a fascinating tale, told with vigor and so succinctly! I relished the conclusion with the Saint Michael heightening your shoulders into wings and giving you the ability to rescue the boy. Well done! Best wishes with this winning Flash Fiction-Joan

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018

Thanks for the great review, Joan. and of course for the bonus star.

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

HA, ha, ha, Love it. A new guardian
angel on the job. Great imagery and
imagination to write into this little
piece of work. Well done my friend Good
luck in the contest. Nancy

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018

Thanks, Nancy. Have a good weekend.

Comment from G.B. Smith

Excellent

Hey there Dallas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery. I hope it does well in the contest
Bear

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018

Thanks, Bear. appreciate the review.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is very good with an unexpected ending. It is a sure contest winner. You have written a unique story that even though short, gives the reader plenty to consider as he reads.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018

Thanks for the kind review.