Comment from Miriam Collins

Excellent

I like how you create a vary calming and soft poem, it goes along with the photo you chose very nicely. I love, "lacy whitecaps kiss the shore" it is a beautiful description and very original. Wonderful job!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 01-May-2018

Thanks so much for the read and the kind review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Writer its always wonderful and so delightful and so much fun to go on the beach in the Summer and take your shoes off and enjoy the sand between your toes. Then watch the tide roll in and wash your feet prints away

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018

Thanks much for the read and the review. The cool water washing those sandy toes feels wonderful.

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

Beautiful presentation for this powerful 5-7-5 poem that will do good in the contest. The poem is packed with lots and lots of imagery.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018

Thanks much for the read and the kind review.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

A lovely picture/poem combo.
Easy to visualize this twilight beach scene, especially the"lacy white caps kiss[ing] the shore."
Your use of S-alliteration and consonance creates the perfect mood.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018

Thanks much for the read and the kind review.