Slide On Outta Here, Old Man Winter!
Tyburn contest entry: Second Place Winner30 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I really like this well thought out and clever way you present to the reader the changing of seasons. You've done a superb job with the artwork and the excellent way it rhymes and flows. I really enjoyed this well written poem Mrs KT. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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I really like this well thought out and clever way you present to the reader the changing of seasons. You've done a superb job with the artwork and the excellent way it rhymes and flows. I really enjoyed this well written poem Mrs KT. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Jeffrey!
I so enjoyed penning this piece!
Comment from MelB
Hi Diane, excellent syllable count and play on words! Perfect artwork. I think we are all glad to see winter go this year and bring on the spring!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Hi Diane, excellent syllable count and play on words! Perfect artwork. I think we are all glad to see winter go this year and bring on the spring!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Hi Mel!
This was such an enjoyable piece to pen!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Ann Tran
Great Tyburn poetry entry Mrs KT. Yes, the woes of winter. Love the humor in your poetry with perfect complementary visuals. All the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Great Tyburn poetry entry Mrs KT. Yes, the woes of winter. Love the humor in your poetry with perfect complementary visuals. All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Hi Ann!
Thank you for your excellent rating and review!
It was a hoot to pen!
diane
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Yes good bye winter and take your chilly cold wind and ice with you. And by ge way winter is my least favorite season. The only thing that I kinda of like about it is wearing my nice boots and winter outfits.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Yes good bye winter and take your chilly cold wind and ice with you. And by ge way winter is my least favorite season. The only thing that I kinda of like about it is wearing my nice boots and winter outfits.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Hello Mary!
Thank you!
Spring has actually made her first appearance today = Just wonderful!
diane
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Awesome. Here in Florida its just so beautiful and Sunny
Comment from angel123
I like your poem and you used good descriptive words to express your wish of winter leaving.
I don't like the coldest that winter brings, but I like the beauty of the snow. I also like your artwork choice. It goes well with your story. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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I like your poem and you used good descriptive words to express your wish of winter leaving.
I don't like the coldest that winter brings, but I like the beauty of the snow. I also like your artwork choice. It goes well with your story. Best wishes!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thank you, angel!
I also appreciate winter?s beauty, but the ice and freezing temperatures have hung on so long this year! Time for spring!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
Comment from The Death
This poem is so timely! I'm sure most of the readers would have related to this. Your poem is in fine format and captures the frustration over extended Winter really well! Good luck in the prompt!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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This poem is so timely! I'm sure most of the readers would have related to this. Your poem is in fine format and captures the frustration over extended Winter really well! Good luck in the prompt!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much, Friend!
I so enjoyed penning this piece!
Winter needs to leave town...now!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tyburn to get winter sliding out the back door and welcome warmer Spring in at the front door. We like the warmer weather better and enjoy it more.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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A very well-written Tyburn to get winter sliding out the back door and welcome warmer Spring in at the front door. We like the warmer weather better and enjoy it more.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Hello Sandra,
I so enjoyed penning this piece.
Thank you for your excellent rating and empathetic review!
Spring is on her way, but she is taking her good ole' time! :)
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO POET: People generally associate springtime with warm weather. We've seen it snow this spring. Perhaps that's why many of us are thinking; Hey, isn't this supposed to be spring? Why is it still snowing? Mr. Sunshine, won't you shine through my window sometime: so I won't feel so cold. I've come up with a quotable quote: "Winter's linger, is like a splinter in my finger. OW!!" I'm feeling you, poet. Hope to me, is favorable expectations. I hope that it will get warmer real soon. I'm like you. I like summertime too. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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HELLO POET: People generally associate springtime with warm weather. We've seen it snow this spring. Perhaps that's why many of us are thinking; Hey, isn't this supposed to be spring? Why is it still snowing? Mr. Sunshine, won't you shine through my window sometime: so I won't feel so cold. I've come up with a quotable quote: "Winter's linger, is like a splinter in my finger. OW!!" I'm feeling you, poet. Hope to me, is favorable expectations. I hope that it will get warmer real soon. I'm like you. I like summertime too. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Hello rhonnie!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
So cold here still, but warmer weather is on its way!
Comment from Miriam Collins
Love it! And the photo you chose creates even more of a sort of comical yet serious plead for some to hurry along. Your word choices are perfect, and I love the beat they create.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Love it! And the photo you chose creates even more of a sort of comical yet serious plead for some to hurry along. Your word choices are perfect, and I love the beat they create.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Hello Kelsey!
So glad my poem resonates with you! I am sooooooooooo tired of winter!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
Comment from karenina
Me too! Winter fel like it was going to hang on until August! Finally, this week some warm days, lots of rain (I don't have to shovel rain!)-and a few robins building nests...
Hurrah!
Karenina-
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Me too! Winter fel like it was going to hang on until August! Finally, this week some warm days, lots of rain (I don't have to shovel rain!)-and a few robins building nests...
Hurrah!
Karenina-
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Hello Karenina!
I still think it is going to be well into May before it feels like spring!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
