Precious Gems
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Rain Chill"Na-po-wri-mo
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Comment from Harry Smith
I found this poem to very interesting with a great picture to accompany it. The poem is filled with imagery. The reader enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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I found this poem to very interesting with a great picture to accompany it. The poem is filled with imagery. The reader enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Dear Harry, Thank yu for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Cinquain about Spring still playing tricks. The sunschine outside is deceitful and the cold an still be felt if not properly dressed against the chill.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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A very well-written Cinquain about Spring still playing tricks. The sunschine outside is deceitful and the cold an still be felt if not properly dressed against the chill.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from karenina
Ah, fickle impetuous spring is here at last! The gnarly gradp of winyer has loosened and suddenly we are playing tag with proper outer apparel! What fun!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Ah, fickle impetuous spring is here at last! The gnarly gradp of winyer has loosened and suddenly we are playing tag with proper outer apparel! What fun!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. It seems we are playing a game - I hope sunlight and flowers bursting forth win out in the end! Dove
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Here spring is taking hold and what a relief not to see snow or scrape windshields!
Comment from meeshu
excellent cinquain, Dove I think this poetry format lends it self to nature writing.
as do you judging, from your very good piece here. good luck in the contest......meeshu
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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excellent cinquain, Dove I think this poetry format lends it self to nature writing.
as do you judging, from your very good piece here. good luck in the contest......meeshu
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Dear meeshu, Thank you for your comments, review and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very well written Cinquain poem about the chilly rain you had. We had a day like that today also. You used very good words and very lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest! love, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Donna, This is a very well written Cinquain poem about the chilly rain you had. We had a day like that today also. You used very good words and very lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest! love, Teri
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your kind comments and review and best wishes. Love, Donna
Comment from Pamusart
This is a good entry for the contest. It has been a long winter. But, i thinkwinyer did not really start until January. So, maybe that is why. It reminds me of the time I flew to sunny California in order to help spread the ashes of my mother. It was on May 15, a time of year when it is normally hot. It was freezing and snowing. I had not brought a jacket because it was hot everywhere else. A real oxymoron. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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This is a good entry for the contest. It has been a long winter. But, i thinkwinyer did not really start until January. So, maybe that is why. It reminds me of the time I flew to sunny California in order to help spread the ashes of my mother. It was on May 15, a time of year when it is normally hot. It was freezing and snowing. I had not brought a jacket because it was hot everywhere else. A real oxymoron. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Dear Pamusart, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
That Spring, it is always playing games with you. I can remember when I lived near the ocean, freezing at a 4th of July fireworks show. The weather just does it own thing and there is nothing you can do. Oh well.=) Fun poem.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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That Spring, it is always playing games with you. I can remember when I lived near the ocean, freezing at a 4th of July fireworks show. The weather just does it own thing and there is nothing you can do. Oh well.=) Fun poem.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Dear Roxanna, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Spring is playing with you and tempting you to lose your jacket earlier than you should! Hopefully you won't need your jacket at all, very soon, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Spring is playing with you and tempting you to lose your jacket earlier than you should! Hopefully you won't need your jacket at all, very soon, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the caprice of Nature, spring goes and comes or ups and downs, as morning was chill it rained well but it became sunny in the evening, enjoyed fair spring; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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This speaks the caprice of Nature, spring goes and comes or ups and downs, as morning was chill it rained well but it became sunny in the evening, enjoyed fair spring; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Air Spirit
The picture is absolutely beautiful... and the words that followed, complemented the mood, tone and scene in your poem.. Mother Nature does like being unpredictable at times... she must laugh at the weather reports, thinking how easily she could 'put them out of business' if she wanted -- they seriously under-rate her.. I really enjoyed your poem and thanks for sharing it with me..
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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The picture is absolutely beautiful... and the words that followed, complemented the mood, tone and scene in your poem.. Mother Nature does like being unpredictable at times... she must laugh at the weather reports, thinking how easily she could 'put them out of business' if she wanted -- they seriously under-rate her.. I really enjoyed your poem and thanks for sharing it with me..
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Dear Air Spirit, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove