Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

This short story is just filled with lots and lots of imagery. The reader really enjoyed the read and will be returning to read more.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018

Thanks, Harry

Comment from nartoonla

Excellent

That was fun and sad it ended so soon. Loved it and found it original. Well done! Why so short flash ficiton, ohhhhhhhhhhhh. Yet, bravo! Ps am I missing others as see it is number eight...

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018

You need to go to my portfolio.

reply by nartoonla on 28-Apr-2018

Ah, thank you, silly me did not think correctly, will do! Talk to you soon.

reply by nartoonla on 28-Apr-2018

Ah, thank you, silly me did not think correctly, will do! Talk to you soon.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Eating bugs. THat's what chameleons do after all. LOL! Must admit I didn't expect that ending though, but it was right for the story... realistic. If I were a chameleon, I'd be eating bugs too. Yuk! :)

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018

Thanks, Phyllis, for giving this a look.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Entertaining one, Bill. It wasn't clear who all were in the meeting. But it makes sense that they ended up all being flies. Fifofum - so that's what the giant was saying all along when he chased Jack down the beanstalk. I liked Camille Leon, too.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Thanks, lyenochka

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

I enjoy your short stories as well. They are well-written and without mistakes. You obviously don't like flies/spider's. Nice end you gave this one. They have to get their have to get the it stories straight. Fay and the detective are on first names.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Thanks, Ine

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, you have a wonderful imagination. I love it. The names are inspirational. You're probably right, Fred, Frank and Flynn will have forgotten all about it. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Fleas and flies, I do despise. As well as spiders who and other bugs in disguise. Your poems inspire me to write poem that I probably would not otherwise write. For this alone, I owe you a vote of thanks. So, Bill I thank you.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Thank you, nomi

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Love the names. Fay Fifofum and Camille Leon.

The detective was the culprit all along. Cute story. You have quite an imagination.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Thanks, da

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Clever story, and one for the chameleon books. Yes, police officers often have to blend in with their surroundings. James Patterson's characters do it all the time. Bringing in the investigative element adds to the interest. Of course the suspects have to get their stories straight. And they have all come up with one. It seems Camille knew all about the missing spider. Camille must have a great record for crime-solving. You might have identified the named characters. In second paragraph, who had would be correct as who is the subject. judi

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

I am always beaten hip and thigh over speaker tags, so I deliberately tried to avoid them. Sorry for any confusion.

reply by judiverse on 26-Apr-2018

I did have a bit of trouble getting the different critters--I mean characters. Perhaps you could even include the species within your story. Maybe others didn't have the problem, so maybe I'm just being dense. judi

Comment from Kerry Foley

Excellent

lol, This is a great little story of the spider, the fly and chameleon, Bill. lol
Nice funny humor, very cute and silly, I enjoyed it. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Thanks, Kerry

reply by Kerry Foley on 27-Apr-2018

You're welcome.