FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Push!""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Push!, is a funny accounting of responsibility that flashes back to those ecstatically painful moments when the gift from God has to be ejected from the womb to become the promise. Nice.
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This poem, Push!, is a funny accounting of responsibility that flashes back to those ecstatically painful moments when the gift from God has to be ejected from the womb to become the promise. Nice.
Comment Written 03-May-2018
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Well good for you!!!
I thoroughly enjoyed the flow and content of your poem. And from a mothers view-point it brought back long faded memories. Your reference to 'Honoring your mother and father' are well noted.
Best wishes always in the contest,
Carolyn
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Well good for you!!!
I thoroughly enjoyed the flow and content of your poem. And from a mothers view-point it brought back long faded memories. Your reference to 'Honoring your mother and father' are well noted.
Best wishes always in the contest,
Carolyn
Comment Written 03-May-2018
Comment from Cheryl Gilmore
Great poem! I enjoyed it very much. Have a wonderful Mother's Day. Kids are always worth the push, right? Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest!
Cheryl xo
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Great poem! I enjoyed it very much. Have a wonderful Mother's Day. Kids are always worth the push, right? Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest!
Cheryl xo
Comment Written 02-May-2018
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
How wonderful to be blessed with children and to willingly devote
all that you are to the love and care of them.
I like the scripture choice and do hope you receive the love, honour and respect
you deserve.
Blessings
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How wonderful to be blessed with children and to willingly devote
all that you are to the love and care of them.
I like the scripture choice and do hope you receive the love, honour and respect
you deserve.
Blessings
Comment Written 02-May-2018
Comment from MelB
I enjoyed reading this. It's nice to see someone who still knows how to honor their mother and father. That's one strong mom too, giving birth to a baby with a big head.
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I enjoyed reading this. It's nice to see someone who still knows how to honor their mother and father. That's one strong mom too, giving birth to a baby with a big head.
Comment Written 02-May-2018
Comment from Tootie
I really enjoyed reading this. It made me smile and also shared such an important message. Being the mom of two wonderful sons, I can relate to the joy this poem shares. Love the entertaining story line. PUSH! LOL Well-written and well done. Awesome! Thank you. God Bless!
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I really enjoyed reading this. It made me smile and also shared such an important message. Being the mom of two wonderful sons, I can relate to the joy this poem shares. Love the entertaining story line. PUSH! LOL Well-written and well done. Awesome! Thank you. God Bless!
Comment Written 02-May-2018
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This is great, kind of funny, kind of touching. I'm sure your mom is very proud of you. Wise to honor your mother and father and especially God. I hope you do or did well in the contest.
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This is great, kind of funny, kind of touching. I'm sure your mom is very proud of you. Wise to honor your mother and father and especially God. I hope you do or did well in the contest.
Comment Written 02-May-2018
Comment from royowen
"What is man that you are mindful of him" Psalm 4. A great passage to starts, of all the indicating clues that God loves us, this is one. Well written entry in this Mother's Day poetry contest. Very quirky, showing the birth of a baby boy, I think this is very different, and certain changes the game for Mother's Day writkng. Very entertaining and imaginative, well done, good luck, blessings Roy ,
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"What is man that you are mindful of him" Psalm 4. A great passage to starts, of all the indicating clues that God loves us, this is one. Well written entry in this Mother's Day poetry contest. Very quirky, showing the birth of a baby boy, I think this is very different, and certain changes the game for Mother's Day writkng. Very entertaining and imaginative, well done, good luck, blessings Roy ,
Comment Written 02-May-2018
Comment from ameen786
Brilliant! A wonderful tribute to a mother reflecting son's obedience to God and the mother; I like the unique style of your verse that's quite meaningful and a joy to read; thanks for sharing and good luck!
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Brilliant! A wonderful tribute to a mother reflecting son's obedience to God and the mother; I like the unique style of your verse that's quite meaningful and a joy to read; thanks for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 02-May-2018
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
I like the back and fourth between mother and child, it was a cheerful piece that many can relate towards, I liked the mothers point of view of child birth, I think you nailed that one, my wife would agree
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I like the back and fourth between mother and child, it was a cheerful piece that many can relate towards, I liked the mothers point of view of child birth, I think you nailed that one, my wife would agree
Comment Written 02-May-2018