Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

Really like the picture that speaks such truth. The poem is filled with lots of imagery. The reader really enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018

Dear Harry, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Cinquain it is always a pleasure to have a friend on whom we can depend at any time just to have a nice time together with no strings attched.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from karenina

Excellent

I am sorry you missed the contest deadline because this is a very well written cinquain....personal, honest, a beginning, middle and an end...not easy at all with so few lines and syllables allowed! Glad you posted it anyway, to share with all of us....and really glad you had a nice time!

Karenina

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Isnt it wonderful to spend 1 moment, 1 hour, 1 day with spmeone you love. Nothing else seems to matter other than being right there sharing every wakening moment you can with that person and its so dear, so precious. You'd rather walk than ride anyway. You never want that time it to end. Beautiful poem exuberant, invigorating color and picture.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Dear Mary, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 26-Apr-2018

My pleasure

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice Cinquain poem you have penned for the contest but missed it. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery with Happy Friendship Day on it. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Blessings, Donna

Comment from Old Soldier

Good

Not sure how the contest works but drop "had" and go with "I missed..."
Its always nice to visit some one we haven't seen in some time. Have a great day at the ball park.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Dear Old Soldier, Thank you for your comments and review. I will go in and take another look at the poem. Dove

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Not trying to rub it in. Lol. But, this would have a good entry for the cinquain contest. I guess we do not get to vote. Most of my friends are male also. I fell in love with baseball 56 years ago. Angels. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Dear Pamusart, Thank you for your comments and review. I'm kicking myself that I missed the contest by only a couple of hours. I like to watch baseball, but I was no good at playing softball in grade school. Dove

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

You have written a very good cinquian poem, too bad you missed the contest. It is a bummer when that happens. A very enjoyable read about your day out. Cheers Jen.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Dear Jen, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks how great it is to celebrate, enjoy, sharing friendship and visiting and seeing friend on Friendship Day; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018

Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Not sure who you have visited, but it has certainly lifted your day. When we see our loved ones we always feel good afterwards, loving words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018

Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove