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Comment from brenda faye curtis
This is an interesting poem, clearly about how we are affected by the company we keep, our views reinforced by their views. It's even more interesting that you found a way to use chameleons to convey this idea. Nice one!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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This is an interesting poem, clearly about how we are affected by the company we keep, our views reinforced by their views. It's even more interesting that you found a way to use chameleons to convey this idea. Nice one!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Brenda
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from lyenochka
That is a great picture! And I think the poem works for chameleons as well as for people. If they are in a group of like-minded souls, they will probably never change.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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That is a great picture! And I think the poem works for chameleons as well as for people. If they are in a group of like-minded souls, they will probably never change.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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They will never know they need to change
Comment from damommy
So far, they haven't anything to challenge them into changing colors. They always look like nothing much bothers them. I guess I'd be that way if I could change my appearance to suit the need.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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So far, they haven't anything to challenge them into changing colors. They always look like nothing much bothers them. I guess I'd be that way if I could change my appearance to suit the need.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Thanks, da, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Ginnygray
This is a short haiku like 5-7-5 about chameleons which usually affect change depending on the habitat that they are in. In this case, together they are remaining quite unaffected. In the second line we see a connection with the first and your satori being the surprise that the chameleons are quite unaffected. Awesome poem!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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This is a short haiku like 5-7-5 about chameleons which usually affect change depending on the habitat that they are in. In this case, together they are remaining quite unaffected. In the second line we see a connection with the first and your satori being the surprise that the chameleons are quite unaffected. Awesome poem!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Ginny
Comment from nomi338
Can I truly believe what I am seeing, a tree full of chameleons, or do my eyes deceive me once again. See, that's the thing with chameleons, you can never quite believe what you see when you think you are looking at them.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Can I truly believe what I am seeing, a tree full of chameleons, or do my eyes deceive me once again. See, that's the thing with chameleons, you can never quite believe what you see when you think you are looking at them.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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There's only one chameleon, nomi
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Wait. What?
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Psych !
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Ya got me.
Comment from frogbook
Oh they are so cute and weird. They kinda look like crabby little old men. Great little work here. Another great series-look forward to what you will come up with next.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Oh they are so cute and weird. They kinda look like crabby little old men. Great little work here. Another great series-look forward to what you will come up with next.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Thank you, FB. Any suggestions?
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Have you already done frog world?
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No
Comment from judiverse
They must be serving in Congress. Great picture. They are just happy to be together. Everything stays the same. You have your 5-7-5 syllable count in perfect order. This one is fun. I didn't know about when they kept their same color. judi
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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They must be serving in Congress. Great picture. They are just happy to be together. Everything stays the same. You have your 5-7-5 syllable count in perfect order. This one is fun. I didn't know about when they kept their same color. judi
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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It apparently IS easy being green.
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It's a very colorful green, too. judi
Comment from nartoonla
HI, Not sure what you mean unaffected, meaning safe from distinction? And some will never change... why do they not change color? A little confused. I love those little creatures and would mind one for a pet, yet what would one feed them? Brief liking them made me stop by to see what you had to say. Not much but what is there to say, besides being a 5 7 5 piece. Which was nice to include them in a poem as no doubt they appreciated it and I much as asked questions enjoyed.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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HI, Not sure what you mean unaffected, meaning safe from distinction? And some will never change... why do they not change color? A little confused. I love those little creatures and would mind one for a pet, yet what would one feed them? Brief liking them made me stop by to see what you had to say. Not much but what is there to say, besides being a 5 7 5 piece. Which was nice to include them in a poem as no doubt they appreciated it and I much as asked questions enjoyed.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Thanks, nartoonia
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written 5-7-5 poem about the unchangeable chameleon. You used very cute words and a great picture! I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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This is a very cute and well written 5-7-5 poem about the unchangeable chameleon. You used very cute words and a great picture! I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Teri