Precious Gems
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Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Dove;
Thank you so much for sharing this poem about springtime. I enjoyed your artwork and the lovely words you chose to describe the scene. I wish it felt like spring today - it is a dismal, drizzle outside,
~patty~
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
Hi, Dove;
Thank you so much for sharing this poem about springtime. I enjoyed your artwork and the lovely words you chose to describe the scene. I wish it felt like spring today - it is a dismal, drizzle outside,
~patty~
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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Dear patty, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Harry Smith
Great picture selection for a excellently well written poem that speaks loud of spring which the reader is so glad to see. The poem is loaded with imagery.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
Great picture selection for a excellently well written poem that speaks loud of spring which the reader is so glad to see. The poem is loaded with imagery.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Dear Harry, Thank yu for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sis Cat
Yes, after a wet, cold winter, spring has finally taken up residence upon our Earth. Your poem is joyful, celebratory. You also imagine the different hues of Spring everywhere.
Thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
Yes, after a wet, cold winter, spring has finally taken up residence upon our Earth. Your poem is joyful, celebratory. You also imagine the different hues of Spring everywhere.
Thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Dear Sis Cat, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this poem. Unfortunately, a lot of us aren't enjoying any of this yet. This poem gives the ones of us who are still waiting anticipation. Thanks for sharing this well written poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
I like this poem. Unfortunately, a lot of us aren't enjoying any of this yet. This poem gives the ones of us who are still waiting anticipation. Thanks for sharing this well written poem. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Dear Jeffrey, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from meeshu
excellent work, Dove. is this a syllable count format or it just happened? it really flows smoothly. you should name it after yourself........meeshu
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
excellent work, Dove. is this a syllable count format or it just happened? it really flows smoothly. you should name it after yourself........meeshu
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Dear meeshu, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautifully written poem about spring taking up residence. It sounds so good to hear, even though I do love the snow too. You used great words and lovely art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
This is a very beautifully written poem about spring taking up residence. It sounds so good to hear, even though I do love the snow too. You used great words and lovely art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna
Comment from karenina
Primavera means Spring? How awesome is THAT! The perfect translation for this season we have impatiently waited for.... The final little patch of snow evaporated today...and a fat robin red breast sat on the peak of my residence and surveyed the world like a king! So great!
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
Primavera means Spring? How awesome is THAT! The perfect translation for this season we have impatiently waited for.... The final little patch of snow evaporated today...and a fat robin red breast sat on the peak of my residence and surveyed the world like a king! So great!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Dear Karenina, I'm so glad you saw a robin! To me, he is the king of little birds, the way you said he surveyed the world like a king! This poem is the first time I've ever used a foreign word. Unfortunately, here where I live we have April showers...again! Maybe I should write a poem about that ! Dove
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It's pouring HERE today as well! I'd write a poem about it but I'm still warming to the Robin!--Karenina
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ABC poem. After a longer than usual wait it seems spring finallty arrived and it is all worth the wait when we look over the fields and see the beauty and the wonderful colors.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
A very well-written ABC poem. After a longer than usual wait it seems spring finallty arrived and it is all worth the wait when we look over the fields and see the beauty and the wonderful colors.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a fantastic greenish view of Spring, and describes different hues of first green that has started dwelling upon our Earth, valley and hills; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
This speaks a fantastic greenish view of Spring, and describes different hues of first green that has started dwelling upon our Earth, valley and hills; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from William Ross
Excellent abc for spring finally showing its face, was a bit worried about the cold going into may, thanks for the share and have a great day
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
Excellent abc for spring finally showing its face, was a bit worried about the cold going into may, thanks for the share and have a great day
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Dear William, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove