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Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Dove;
Thank you so much for sharing this poem about springtime. I enjoyed your artwork and the lovely words you chose to describe the scene. I wish it felt like spring today - it is a dismal, drizzle outside,

~patty~

 Comment Written 01-May-2018


reply by the author on 02-May-2018
    Dear patty, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Harry Smith
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Great picture selection for a excellently well written poem that speaks loud of spring which the reader is so glad to see. The poem is loaded with imagery.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
    Dear Harry, Thank yu for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sis Cat
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Yes, after a wet, cold winter, spring has finally taken up residence upon our Earth. Your poem is joyful, celebratory. You also imagine the different hues of Spring everywhere.

Thank you for sharing this delightful poem.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
    Dear Sis Cat, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I like this poem. Unfortunately, a lot of us aren't enjoying any of this yet. This poem gives the ones of us who are still waiting anticipation. Thanks for sharing this well written poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
    Dear Jeffrey, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from meeshu
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excellent work, Dove. is this a syllable count format or it just happened? it really flows smoothly. you should name it after yourself........meeshu

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
    Dear meeshu, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautifully written poem about spring taking up residence. It sounds so good to hear, even though I do love the snow too. You used great words and lovely art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna
Comment from karenina
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Primavera means Spring? How awesome is THAT! The perfect translation for this season we have impatiently waited for.... The final little patch of snow evaporated today...and a fat robin red breast sat on the peak of my residence and surveyed the world like a king! So great!

Karenina

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    Dear Karenina, I'm so glad you saw a robin! To me, he is the king of little birds, the way you said he surveyed the world like a king! This poem is the first time I've ever used a foreign word. Unfortunately, here where I live we have April showers...again! Maybe I should write a poem about that ! Dove
reply by karenina on 25-Apr-2018
    It's pouring HERE today as well! I'd write a poem about it but I'm still warming to the Robin!--Karenina
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written ABC poem. After a longer than usual wait it seems spring finallty arrived and it is all worth the wait when we look over the fields and see the beauty and the wonderful colors.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a fantastic greenish view of Spring, and describes different hues of first green that has started dwelling upon our Earth, valley and hills; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from William Ross
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Excellent abc for spring finally showing its face, was a bit worried about the cold going into may, thanks for the share and have a great day

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Dear William, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove