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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from frogbook
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hahahahaha, What an ending, and I was so into the perfectly rhymed flow it stopped me in my tracks. The whole thing was a unique idea for a great concept.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thanks, FB
Comment from nomi338
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Ooh, revisionist history. Now Bill you know that that chameleon spent the next week or two trying to explain why he missed the boat, where he was, what he was doing and with whom he was doing it. This may have set the tone for all future relationships, it had to start somewhere.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thanks, nomi. He probably didn?t know which ark to be on.
Comment from Harry Smith
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This is a very interesting poem that is full of both emotions and imagery and the reader really enjoyed the read and will be returning for more.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thanks, Harry
Comment from meeshu
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Kent the chameleon. Really? that is so funny as is your poem itself. it rhymes so nicely until the tag line/ no rhyme. superbly rendered, bill........meeshu

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thanks, meeshu