Precious Gems
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Comment from Harry Smith
Very interesting but also inspirational poem that is compliment with a great picture. The poem is full of both imagery and emotions.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Very interesting but also inspirational poem that is compliment with a great picture. The poem is full of both imagery and emotions.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Dear Harry, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello DoveMarie, what a lovely poem that is filled with anticipation and desire. And it's the question of all questions, really. Paul thought it would be soon, and so did a lot of others. I imagine that when Hitler invaded Europe a few people would have thought it was the end then. But none of us know the time or the hour. I often wish it would happen sooner than later, especially when you look around at the World and all the fighting and horror that is going on.
I enjoyed reading your work, and thanks for sharing it, Ana.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Hello DoveMarie, what a lovely poem that is filled with anticipation and desire. And it's the question of all questions, really. Paul thought it would be soon, and so did a lot of others. I imagine that when Hitler invaded Europe a few people would have thought it was the end then. But none of us know the time or the hour. I often wish it would happen sooner than later, especially when you look around at the World and all the fighting and horror that is going on.
I enjoyed reading your work, and thanks for sharing it, Ana.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Dear Ana, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very beautiful and well written poem of a soul longing for the return of our Lord! I know that all of God's children are waiting that day! Very good wording and imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Donna, This is a very beautiful and well written poem of a soul longing for the return of our Lord! I know that all of God's children are waiting that day! Very good wording and imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. If I knew how to write music, I would put it to a song. I was singing a few words of it a cappella in my head after I wrote it. Donna
Comment from robyn corum
Dove,
Wow. Of all the things of yours I have read today, the following two lines have got to be my favorite! They are so beautiful!!
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Now I long for Your consolation
And the unearned gift of Heavenly salvation
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Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Dove,
Wow. Of all the things of yours I have read today, the following two lines have got to be my favorite! They are so beautiful!!
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Now I long for Your consolation
And the unearned gift of Heavenly salvation
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Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Dear robyn, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this well written poem that expresses to the reader a heartcry anticipating the returning of the Lord. I also like the iinspirational message that this poem conveys. Well done Dovemarie!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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I like this well written poem that expresses to the reader a heartcry anticipating the returning of the Lord. I also like the iinspirational message that this poem conveys. Well done Dovemarie!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Dear Jeffrey, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Katya
Nice poem, clever use of rhyme and repetition.
But hey, if we had to wait until after the Second Coming before we got consolation, it would be a sad world indeed, much sadder than it is now.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Nice poem, clever use of rhyme and repetition.
But hey, if we had to wait until after the Second Coming before we got consolation, it would be a sad world indeed, much sadder than it is now.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Dear Katya, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Auto-Manic
I think this would make a great song, it has the rhyme scheme to be put to music. and as for the question? Maybe he visits often. Can't imagine that loving spirit likes what he sees.
Nice job
AM
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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I think this would make a great song, it has the rhyme scheme to be put to music. and as for the question? Maybe he visits often. Can't imagine that loving spirit likes what he sees.
Nice job
AM
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Dear Auto-Manic, Thank you for your comments and review. DoveDe
Comment from Sugarray77
A great way to put forth an eternal question for believers. I like how you incorporated your own testimony into this verse. You crafted a well balanced poem. Good job.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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A great way to put forth an eternal question for believers. I like how you incorporated your own testimony into this verse. You crafted a well balanced poem. Good job.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Dear Sugarray, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from karenina
Reberent poem beseeching our Savior to be with us as we go through earyhly woes and challengs. Of course, it wi. Be at His appointed hour, not ours--but you capture the need we have to assert our faith.
Karenina
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Reberent poem beseeching our Savior to be with us as we go through earyhly woes and challengs. Of course, it wi. Be at His appointed hour, not ours--but you capture the need we have to assert our faith.
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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?Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened.?
― Dr. Seuss
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I think the same thing. The world is such a mess, but really it always has been. Without God people are a mess, they do what is right in their own eyes and make a mess. But my favorite verse says, " In this world you will have tribulation, but be of good cheer, for I have overcome the world." John 16:33. So no matter what, God wins. =}
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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I think the same thing. The world is such a mess, but really it always has been. Without God people are a mess, they do what is right in their own eyes and make a mess. But my favorite verse says, " In this world you will have tribulation, but be of good cheer, for I have overcome the world." John 16:33. So no matter what, God wins. =}
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Dear Roxanna, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove