A Treasure of Nature
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Comment from Ginnygray
A beautiful poem of three stanzas depicting the treasures of a rainbow as seen through children's eyes of wonder and adults, enjoying the freshness and unexpected treasure that the rainbow displays.
Congratulations on your third place win! I was honored to be in such great company as you and Sharon Meda. Enjoy your well deserved 15th review.ð???
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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A beautiful poem of three stanzas depicting the treasures of a rainbow as seen through children's eyes of wonder and adults, enjoying the freshness and unexpected treasure that the rainbow displays.
Congratulations on your third place win! I was honored to be in such great company as you and Sharon Meda. Enjoy your well deserved 15th review.ð???
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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thank you so much. I enjoyed your lovely poem, too!
Katharine - pome lover
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you're right! You were the 15th reviewer - the reason my poem was recognized! many thanks!
Katharine
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem about rainbows, A Treasure of Nature, reveals the spectrum of appreciation for the prism of color from both young and old. It is a source of wonder, fantasy, and faith.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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This poem about rainbows, A Treasure of Nature, reveals the spectrum of appreciation for the prism of color from both young and old. It is a source of wonder, fantasy, and faith.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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yep. thanks
Comment from Joan E.
You selected the perfect picture to reinforce your rainbow description. I relished your opening line and your rhymed, rhythmic quatrains. Here's to us being children again! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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You selected the perfect picture to reinforce your rainbow description. I relished your opening line and your rhymed, rhythmic quatrains. Here's to us being children again! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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thanks a lot for your very kind words.
writing for children is the closest I get to being a child again. I love it.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment from BeasPeas
Very nicely composed. A poem of joy and happiness. Everyone delights at seeing a rainbow. Much luck in the contest with this fine, upbeat entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Very nicely composed. A poem of joy and happiness. Everyone delights at seeing a rainbow. Much luck in the contest with this fine, upbeat entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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thank you so much.
much appreciated!
Comment from zanya
Some genuine emotion expressed here at the sight of the rainbow in the sky with its array of color and mystique 'is the perfect treasure/seeing it at all '- nice approach
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Some genuine emotion expressed here at the sight of the rainbow in the sky with its array of color and mystique 'is the perfect treasure/seeing it at all '- nice approach
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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many thanks for your kind words.
Comment from angel123
Your poem is the perfect package. It's uplifting and It flows and rhymes well with a great message. I enjoyed reading it and I love the artwork choice. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Your poem is the perfect package. It's uplifting and It flows and rhymes well with a great message. I enjoyed reading it and I love the artwork choice. Best wishes!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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thank you so much and thanks for the wonderful 6!!
Your rainbow poem is lovely!!!!
pome lover
Comment from Harry Smith
This is a great rainbow entry with a perfect picture. The poem is outstandingly well written with lots and lots of imagery. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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This is a great rainbow entry with a perfect picture. The poem is outstandingly well written with lots and lots of imagery. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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thanks, Harry! and thanks for the good wishes.
PL
Comment from Mr.write_4u
This is one of my favorites. The photo is perfect, and to me, adds vision to most poems. The flow is so smooth, and the rhyming seemed effortless. A great entry to the rainbow writing prompt. I wish you luck!
-Larry
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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This is one of my favorites. The photo is perfect, and to me, adds vision to most poems. The flow is so smooth, and the rhyming seemed effortless. A great entry to the rainbow writing prompt. I wish you luck!
-Larry
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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thanks so much. I appreciate your kind words.
PL
Comment from Sherman541
I think the pot of gold is something of a myth, but the rainbow, now that is a treasure. One that you can see and enjoy, sometimes you can get a double rainbow and I have even seen three at one time. The rainbow is God's gift to us, that we should treasure. Nice visual for the poem. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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I think the pot of gold is something of a myth, but the rainbow, now that is a treasure. One that you can see and enjoy, sometimes you can get a double rainbow and I have even seen three at one time. The rainbow is God's gift to us, that we should treasure. Nice visual for the poem. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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thanks for the good wishes.
the treasure at the end of the rainbow question was rhetorical - just a bit of whimsy.
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I did not think it was a true question, but I like the poem and You are most welcome :)
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Much success to you in the contest. Lovely poem describing how children are delighted when they see a rainbow and how refreshing it is to adults when they see one. But it's always been that one thing that if you get to the end of a rainbow there's a pot of gold which no one has ever done that so it's a myth. Rainbows do have beautiful colors and every time that I see one it puts a smile on my face but there was this saying when I was in school that said rainbow in the morning the sailor takes warning, rainbow at night a Sailor's Delight. I guess it was the weather forecast for people out on the seas. Anyway I remembered it from when I was a child.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Much success to you in the contest. Lovely poem describing how children are delighted when they see a rainbow and how refreshing it is to adults when they see one. But it's always been that one thing that if you get to the end of a rainbow there's a pot of gold which no one has ever done that so it's a myth. Rainbows do have beautiful colors and every time that I see one it puts a smile on my face but there was this saying when I was in school that said rainbow in the morning the sailor takes warning, rainbow at night a Sailor's Delight. I guess it was the weather forecast for people out on the seas. Anyway I remembered it from when I was a child.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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thank you. I have been getting several comments about the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow being a myth. It was just a rhetorical question - bit of whimsy. But like you, rainbows put a smile on my face, too.
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Yes they do and thanks for sharing
