Savoring the Nectar
3-5-3 poem12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Savoring the Nector, has the right syllabic format and finds the mile-a-minute bird dining faster that we can choose something to eat. Life is fast for some.
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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This 3-5-3, Savoring the Nector, has the right syllabic format and finds the mile-a-minute bird dining faster that we can choose something to eat. Life is fast for some.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is very cute, fun, and cleverly written. As fast as the hummingbird moves, I don't know how slow this beautiful bird can sip. It would be interesting to find out. I enjoyed reading this June! Well done!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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This is very cute, fun, and cleverly written. As fast as the hummingbird moves, I don't know how slow this beautiful bird can sip. It would be interesting to find out. I enjoyed reading this June! Well done!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Comment from Michael Steinert
This poem does a great job attached to image, I often wonder if the poem is wrote after image selection or before, either way it was a grate read.
Thank you and have a great day!
Mike
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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This poem does a great job attached to image, I often wonder if the poem is wrote after image selection or before, either way it was a grate read.
Thank you and have a great day!
Mike
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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The picture inspired the words in this case. I love hummingbirds. Thank you for dropping by to read and review,
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the hummingbird that shares sweetnees of the nectar with us in our lives. To see them busy drinking the nectar is a wonderful experience.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the hummingbird that shares sweetnees of the nectar with us in our lives. To see them busy drinking the nectar is a wonderful experience.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Comment from Harry Smith
Great picture selection for this 5-7-5 poem that is full of imagery. The reader really enjoyed the read and will be returning to read more.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Great picture selection for this 5-7-5 poem that is full of imagery. The reader really enjoyed the read and will be returning to read more.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
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Comment from Katya
Ooo-ooo-ooo! So VERY nice. Lovely image in the poem [lovely picture too, actually] and a meaningful statement, wrapped up in a tiny package. I like it!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Ooo-ooo-ooo! So VERY nice. Lovely image in the poem [lovely picture too, actually] and a meaningful statement, wrapped up in a tiny package. I like it!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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So glad you share the sentiments. Sip slowly and savor...summer is too short.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Oh, I wish I had a six for this beautiful 5-7-5 poem. Hummingbirds like jewels hovering and flitting among red and orange flowers (bees aren't attracted to those colors, I'm told, so no competition for food). Outstanding. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Oh, I wish I had a six for this beautiful 5-7-5 poem. Hummingbirds like jewels hovering and flitting among red and orange flowers (bees aren't attracted to those colors, I'm told, so no competition for food). Outstanding. :) Nancy
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
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Comment from N. Rabwar
This is a good entry. Your words are soft yet evocative. I would definitely like my life to be as sweet as hummingbird dreams. I also liked the image you selected.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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This is a good entry. Your words are soft yet evocative. I would definitely like my life to be as sweet as hummingbird dreams. I also liked the image you selected.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
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Comment from meeshu
a very nice little poem . simple (I guess 5-7-5 poems have to be). it is upbeat and positive . should do very well in the contest. good luck to you.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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a very nice little poem . simple (I guess 5-7-5 poems have to be). it is upbeat and positive . should do very well in the contest. good luck to you.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
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Comment from Old Soldier
I get what your saying . Your second line to me translates, life is sweet only in humming birds dreams. Try, "Just has the humming takes the nectar" I think that support the title and hammers you message home more clearly.
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I get what your saying . Your second line to me translates, life is sweet only in humming birds dreams. Try, "Just has the humming takes the nectar" I think that support the title and hammers you message home more clearly.
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2018