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This is the way it all began.
4 total reviews
Comment from
Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Sixty-five Years, has the right syllabic format and sends a shout out to the grand old patriarch, shy like a fox, getting the ladies to come to him. Go, Billy, Go.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
Comment from
Liberty Justice
WOW longevity really lives in this family. You just got my thumbs up and hope you win. What an amazing short but sweet recount of how love blossomed into so many children and grandchildren. What a cute photo and how they started out so young and their love still lasts. WELL DONE. liberty justice
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
Comment from
Katya
Sweet poem! In the context you construct here, it's very touching. And the two silhouettes are a really cute illustration for it.
And what do you do if you like shy guys, huh? You have to ask them!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
Comment from
karenina
Thank goodness for a very young lady who saw what she wanted and spoke up! My grandmother used to say "A man chases a woman until catches him!"
Loved this....
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
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