Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

Hi Bill,
Impressive alliteration in sleek slitherers.
There is a whole new world under the sea and
the image itself is quite a catch.
It reminds me of moths in grass under a full moon. Lol.
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Thanks, Shirley

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Why do I feel like this is going to be a National Geographic presentation? This sounds like the voice-over. I can practically hear the somber tones. You have a perfect 5-7-5 syllable count going. Excellent alliteration in the third line. Can you say slick slitherers five times real fast? This is a fun presentation. judi

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018

Thanks, Judi, for the upbeat review, Bill

reply by judiverse on 20-Apr-2018

You're very welcome. Have you tried repeating slick slitherers yet? judi

reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018

Yes, and I received strange looks.

reply by judiverse on 20-Apr-2018

Don't try it on the street then. judi

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Ooh stop. Speech that features too many esses, cause some of us to splutter and sputter, splashing all sorts of sounds, limply lisping as we try to iterate those irritating sounds.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018

So sorry, Sir.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem about the sea worms. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Those are some very interesting looking worms! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

Well they can pretty much stay waaaaayyyyy down below..creepy little slltherers!.. nice little worm world...always enjoy your work :-))) but worms??? :-P

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018

Thanks, Susan

Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

Nice short poem about sea worms. They originate from the coral reef bursting out and looking like thin slithered worms. I wonder do they crawl out of the reef to live in the sea, or do they come on land after birth?

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

Hope they stay in the ocean. They get about five feet long.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

What an amazing picture that is, Bill. Thank goodness our eyesight isn't all that, or we might never participate in the half of all the neat things going on behind the scenes.

I like it, velly, velly much.

Gloria

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

Thanks, Gloria

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Very interesting, and beautifully presented. Good idea going with the sea worms, something we don't know anything about.

Like the alliteration of the last line.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

Thanks, da

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

I like this, although to be honest with you I have an aversion to worms. Interesting picture,the way you lay out the words and the colors you chose are eye catching. I like these animal/insect poems, they are very whimsical.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

Thanks, BN

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I like this worm write Bill, great picture and loving the last line of aliteration, the worms win here with a spectacular picture show, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

Thanks, Dolly