The Bridge of Rainbows
The journey of a cat to the bridge of rainbows22 total reviews
Comment from Savita George
I like the play of words which lend beauty to the poem. The rescue of the pup and the subsequent exile from the house makes interesting reading
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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I like the play of words which lend beauty to the poem. The rescue of the pup and the subsequent exile from the house makes interesting reading
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed my wordplay, one of my favorite tools.
Comment from Pamusart
This is a good entry for the contest.
"Stones tinkling against each other telling the stories of their journey
Wind in the trees whispering a sweet hymn of glory
Softness of the pine needle cushioning the path "
I loved the metaphors above. I posted one about whispering trees. It was actually the leaves which were whispering
"The canopy sky attempting to washing their loss away "
In the Above maybe lose the ing of washing. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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This is a good entry for the contest.
"Stones tinkling against each other telling the stories of their journey
Wind in the trees whispering a sweet hymn of glory
Softness of the pine needle cushioning the path "
I loved the metaphors above. I posted one about whispering trees. It was actually the leaves which were whispering
"The canopy sky attempting to washing their loss away "
In the Above maybe lose the ing of washing. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the heads-up on the extra ing. I had played around with it too much and had remnants of the first thought. I'm glad you enjoyed my metaphors. They are actually my favorite part too.
