Interdependency
5/7/5 Contest Entry22 total reviews
Comment from MelB
Hi Diane, this is a wonderful contest entry. Excellent syllable count. I love the picture and those birds are really trusting. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hi Diane, this is a wonderful contest entry. Excellent syllable count. I love the picture and those birds are really trusting. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Mel!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Michael Steinert
What a great picture and a strong contest entry for sure! I love how the tittle of the poem is Interdependency as opposed to codependency.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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What a great picture and a strong contest entry for sure! I love how the tittle of the poem is Interdependency as opposed to codependency.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Michael!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from ronnie k
Truth, fact, assumed are searched for must have a place too settle and take root, one mans Truth can be another lie, I did not mean too murder your poem but it defined what I am feeling, thank you.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Truth, fact, assumed are searched for must have a place too settle and take root, one mans Truth can be another lie, I did not mean too murder your poem but it defined what I am feeling, thank you.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hi ronnie!
Thank you for stopping by and your review!
diane
Comment from Rasmine
Mrs. KT, hello,
I think this is precious. I also agree with it; we are here to help and love all of life. Love the photo you chose!
I wish you all the luck with the contest.
Nome
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Mrs. KT, hello,
I think this is precious. I also agree with it; we are here to help and love all of life. Love the photo you chose!
I wish you all the luck with the contest.
Nome
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Nome,
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Pamusart
This is a good entry for the contest. I love the photo. Those birds really trust the person who owns this hand. I keep intending to get a bird feeder. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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This is a good entry for the contest. I love the photo. Those birds really trust the person who owns this hand. I keep intending to get a bird feeder. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Pam,
So pleased you enjoyed!
thank you!
diane
Comment from nartoonla
A little help from our friends goes a long way and helping our little-feathered friends and others would be ever so kind as they are living creatures and need to survive. Well done and said in just a few words.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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A little help from our friends goes a long way and helping our little-feathered friends and others would be ever so kind as they are living creatures and need to survive. Well done and said in just a few words.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello nartoonia!
Thank you for your excellent rating and review!
diane
Comment from Kerry Foley
This is such a clever poem with a double meaning. I love the birds feeding in a hand of a human. The birds might be helping sooth the person doing the feeding as well.
~Kerry
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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This is such a clever poem with a double meaning. I love the birds feeding in a hand of a human. The birds might be helping sooth the person doing the feeding as well.
~Kerry
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Kerry!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
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You're welcome.
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a touching and beautiful 5-7-5 poem. It's hard to imagine that such a tiny form could command such a powerful response, but in fact, this instills the strongest feelings of empathy - it speaks to the very reason for living, IMO.
I would rate this small poem with a six, if I had one. *****************OUTSTANDING
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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What a touching and beautiful 5-7-5 poem. It's hard to imagine that such a tiny form could command such a powerful response, but in fact, this instills the strongest feelings of empathy - it speaks to the very reason for living, IMO.
I would rate this small poem with a six, if I had one. *****************OUTSTANDING
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hello Friend!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
dian
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You are welcome.
Comment from Harry Smith
Exceptionally well written is this poem with a picture that really complimented the poem. This 5-7-5 is just full of imagery. The poem is a great entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Exceptionally well written is this poem with a picture that really complimented the poem. This 5-7-5 is just full of imagery. The poem is a great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Harry!
The birds have truly suffered in this last round of ice and snow, but spring is on its way!
Thank you for your excellent rating and kind review!
Comment from pome lover
what a neat poem and picture. Is it your picture? If so, what a fun and rewarding experience. Chickadees come to my feeders, but I have never fed them from my hand.
lovely 5-7-5 poem. good luck in the contest.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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what a neat poem and picture. Is it your picture? If so, what a fun and rewarding experience. Chickadees come to my feeders, but I have never fed them from my hand.
lovely 5-7-5 poem. good luck in the contest.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hello Katharine,
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review.
Didn't even come close to winning the contest, but I enjoyed penning this piece!
diane