Comment from karenina

Excellent

Tercets and Couplets indeed! A nice nursery book theme ... Babysitters, Nannys, Moms, all will relate. They can wear you out but look like little angels when they drift off for a nap or for the night. Cute!
Karenina

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

reply by karenina on 19-Apr-2018

Welcome!

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the children listen to and keep enjoy fairytale at bedtime but in a slow process entering their own dreamland adventure and sleep without a finish; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

DM,

This is an adorable poem -- though I got a bit tickled with the line about you missing him when he sleeps. As a mom of three, I have to admit, I enjoyed those sleeping times! hahahaha! (Yes, I'm bad!) Thanks for sharing!!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Dear robyn, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove When I talked in my poem about missing him, I felt lonely now that he had gone to sleep and there was no one to play with or have fun with. I was a babysitter, I never got to do these things with my own child, as he was adopted away from me at age 2, and I only saw him on visits during the day. Dove