Precious Gems
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "The End of the Day"Na-po-wri-mo
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how the end of the day appears and how it has been used as it reveals and the day is defined as seen and enjoyed; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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This speaks how the end of the day appears and how it has been used as it reveals and the day is defined as seen and enjoyed; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Katya
It's a nice poem. I feel it's sort of random, though--is if you were choosing words to make rhymes, rather than ones essential to the meaning or feeling you wish to convey.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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It's a nice poem. I feel it's sort of random, though--is if you were choosing words to make rhymes, rather than ones essential to the meaning or feeling you wish to convey.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Dear Katya, You're most of the time a little hard with me, but I do try. Thank you for saying the poem was nice, and for your excellent review. Dove
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Oh dear. Though I'm trying to be helpful, I guess I am hard. Feel free to tune it down a little on your end--you are doing good stuff, you know.
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Dear Katya, Thank you. Dove