Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Love the play on the word "dug" and the presentation on the page. Very wormlike. Maybe fishermen would appreciate having a lot of worms. Me, not so much so. Fortunately, I don't have to see a lot of them. I'll just let sleeping worms lie, or whatever they do. And they'd better stay away from my cats. judi

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Thanks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 18-Apr-2018

You're welcome. judi

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

How clever writing your words in the shape of a worm! I have to say that your poems always make me smile,they are very unique. I really liked the parakeet poems. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thanks, BN

reply by Boogienights on 17-Apr-2018

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Clever, wormy shaped poem here and a profound and philosophical statement too! Haha. Another one to give us a laugh in our day.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thanks, FB

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

To the fishing hole, I've got my fishing pole and I am armed to the teeth with bait, oh man I just can't wait. Gonna catch a dozen fish, do with them anything I wish. I know you will wish that you were me, something that you could never be. I am oh so cool, you are just an unlucky fool. Too bad for you.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Don?t fall in

reply by nomi338 on 17-Apr-2018

Oops! Too late, I'm all wet.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute shape and short poem you have penned. You used very cute wording and very good imagery with the shape you used. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from anitageorge1

Excellent

like this good connection and flow. I will continue to follow you.I read alot and this has been the best so far. I like when i can feel the writers intention .Its great to read work like this.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018

Thanks, Anita

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

I can visualize that worm making its way from the bottom of the dirt to the top. Clever formatting. Yes, there would be a lot and that's a good sign. Seems they help to aerate the grass or something like that.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018

Thanks, Shari, for giving this a look. Worm! Whose idea was this?

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello Bill, I love your poems, and this one is very creative with the great word selection and the shape of the worm as it wriggles down the screen. I enjoyed it very much and would recommend your poetry to anyone that wants something amusing and unique. Nicely done, cheers, Ana.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018

Thanks, Ana