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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written poem. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely art work. We are a truly blessed people with ministering Angels and the Holy Spirit of God on our side! love, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Love you, Donna (My angel loves you too!) Donna
Comment from karenina
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First an editorial comment. Why are these reviews worth two cents? Really?

OKay, got that out of the way. I have always believed in a guardian angel...an offshoot, no doubt of growing up in Catholic Shools...

Still, the Nuns would caution us about a devil on one shoulder and an angel on another...and we were to be in God's grace to as to make the best choice.

Must have been a bad connection....I lost track of the grace and made plenty of bad choices.

I can relate.

The good news is we only need to recognize our sins, ask forgiveness and atone and we are made clean and new again.

Love your poem.

Life may be cruel but God gives as many chances at it takes....

Karenina

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. DoveDear
reply by karenina on 17-Apr-2018
    welcome !
Comment from meeshu
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a beautiful song of redemption, Dove. it is so well written in form and content.
a like the idea of angels as liaisons to God. this a very important write.....meeshu

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Dear meeshu, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Supe
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I think we have all been there but takes some soul searching to admit it. Beautiful piece and the art work complements the words. I am glad you have found your guardian angel. Nice job. Smooth and flowing right to the end.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Dear Supe, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove