Harry on his death bed
if you gotta go...........5 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Welcome back and with an eye-catching artwork plus presentation! You certainly captured the moment, and Harry is really not so poor!! Still chortling- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Welcome back and with an eye-catching artwork plus presentation! You certainly captured the moment, and Harry is really not so poor!! Still chortling- Joan
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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thx Joan I hope my poem was not in bad taste. i wasn't expecting to win the contest..haha.. lol.. i looked to see if you were still on Fanstory, I was glad to see u name. i am busy planting cotton in the Mississippi Delta around a small town named Indianola, MS. BB King is buried here. Many famous Blues musicians were born within a 50 mile radius of Indianola. hope you are well. take care. There is a first class, 17 million dolla,r BB King museum in Indianola.
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Thanks for thinking about me. Your poem was a bit risque, but in good fun. I am glad you are doing well and busy in the Mississippi Delta, but still reserving time for museum visits. Cheers- Joan
Comment from mkflood
lolol..cute..i do thank you for selecting my work. your comical story does work well together and its an honor to have my work included with yours. great job on the story and thanks again..mkflood
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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lolol..cute..i do thank you for selecting my work. your comical story does work well together and its an honor to have my work included with yours. great job on the story and thanks again..mkflood
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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love your picture. it does fit , lol!
Comment from l.raven
HI Pierre, so good to see you my friend...I hope you are well...I'll take it from the title...what a way to go...that Harry died with a smile on his face...very well written...and the perfect picture...love your poem...Love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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HI Pierre, so good to see you my friend...I hope you are well...I'll take it from the title...what a way to go...that Harry died with a smile on his face...very well written...and the perfect picture...love your poem...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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i hope he was smiling. lol
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I'm sure he was...smiling...xxoo love
Comment from Pamusart
So, did Harry die? Maybe die happy? Because he was so out of shape that he had a heart attack. That is how I interpret this. I am sure he enjoyed Betty for a spell. The question is. If you are far, old and ugly and you can't even get a woman to look at you, woukd you rather die happy or live miserably? I am not a man, so I do not get a vote. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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So, did Harry die? Maybe die happy? Because he was so out of shape that he had a heart attack. That is how I interpret this. I am sure he enjoyed Betty for a spell. The question is. If you are far, old and ugly and you can't even get a woman to look at you, woukd you rather die happy or live miserably? I am not a man, so I do not get a vote. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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harry does not seem to be a deep thinker. i suspect he wasn't aware that he was making a choice. lol
Comment from karenina
Poor mattress more like it! Springs must network out! Mice must have heir paws in their ears. Ugh. This poem wi a limited as birth control! (LOL)
Karenina
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Poor mattress more like it! Springs must network out! Mice must have heir paws in their ears. Ugh. This poem wi a limited as birth control! (LOL)
Karenina
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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thx for the review. it was fun writing it. my family got a kick out of it. lol
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it was a kick to read!
