~ Conversation With God ~
A poem conversing with God6 total reviews
Comment from jmbennett82
Very inspiring to say the least! Only thing I would critique is possibly changing "smokey and thick." Perhaps unbreathably thick" or anything that can take the "and" out of it. That's just my opinion so I would never say that it is a killer or anything like that.
It's nice to read inspiring words like this as a believer because it definitely hits home. Good job!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Very inspiring to say the least! Only thing I would critique is possibly changing "smokey and thick." Perhaps unbreathably thick" or anything that can take the "and" out of it. That's just my opinion so I would never say that it is a killer or anything like that.
It's nice to read inspiring words like this as a believer because it definitely hits home. Good job!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Thank you very much!! xoxo
Comment from essence56
This poem has touched my soul and heart to the fullest. I believe very strongly in God and have very strong faith. I feel this piece in the bottom of y heart. I talk to God all the time and feel ther comfort he places upon me. The has very good flow and it's words have very strong meaning. It gave me wonderful visions. Thank you
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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This poem has touched my soul and heart to the fullest. I believe very strongly in God and have very strong faith. I feel this piece in the bottom of y heart. I talk to God all the time and feel ther comfort he places upon me. The has very good flow and it's words have very strong meaning. It gave me wonderful visions. Thank you
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you so very much my friend. What a beautiful comment and rating....xoxo
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a conversation with God, Jesus speaks about His stand and appreciation of God for guiding Him and how His faith went through the bright light; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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This speaks a conversation with God, Jesus speaks about His stand and appreciation of God for guiding Him and how His faith went through the bright light; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you so very much for the great comment and high rating. I am so truly grateful....xoxo
Comment from meeshu
a heartfelt prayer. truly devotional writing and verse. each stanza a prayer unto itself, every verse a chorus to His song. good luck in the contest you will do well.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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a heartfelt prayer. truly devotional writing and verse. each stanza a prayer unto itself, every verse a chorus to His song. good luck in the contest you will do well.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you so very, very much my friend!! I truly appreciate the wonderful comment and high rating....xoxo
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from Michael Steinert
That was a lovely poem to present as a close to God as you are, and I couldn't find any errors either. Great read on such a personal topic.
Thank you and have a great day!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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That was a lovely poem to present as a close to God as you are, and I couldn't find any errors either. Great read on such a personal topic.
Thank you and have a great day!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you so very much!!
xoxo
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, this is well written and a great entry for the competition. Spot on and I wish you all the best with it. I noticed no errors, just lovely spiritual verse. Thanks for sharing your writing with me. It is very candid and lovely. Ana.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Hello, this is well written and a great entry for the competition. Spot on and I wish you all the best with it. I noticed no errors, just lovely spiritual verse. Thanks for sharing your writing with me. It is very candid and lovely. Ana.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you so very much!! I am beyond grateful for the great comment and high amount of stars.....xoxo
