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Nature's Poetic Voice.

Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Autumn's Chill."
A sensory appreciation of nature.

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Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Oh, I'm sorry Shirley dear you have a mistake. A big one.
When gusty winds blow autumn's chill A
see verdant leaves turn shades of brown. B
Warm night air cools as seasons blend?
When gusty winds blow autumn's chill. a
Soon leaves will fall to dance at will a
To twist and twirl, then onward wend ?
When gusty winds blow autumn's chill A
see verdant leaves turn shades of brown. B


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Hi Nancy,
    Thanks for noticing my mistakes which seem to happen when I use my tablet at night. I have fixed them.
    .I appreciate your time and review.
    Blessings
    Shirley
Comment from Teri7
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Shirley, This is a very well written and nice Triolet poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Thanks for your time and review Teri.
    Blessings
    Shirley
Comment from RodG
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The triplet is one of my favorite poetry forms as it is perfect for describing the seasons. The image of the Autumn chill, falling leaves and "blending" seasons is easy to visualize because of your refrains.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Thank you.
    I appreciate your time and review.
    :-) Shirley
Comment from jaded831
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I enjoyed your triolet, great form, perfect rhymes. Your poem is very smooth and you painted a picture with your words, and you can feel the chill of autumn. I can't find any flaws. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Thanks for reviewing.
    :-) Shirley
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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I love poems that can share the beauty and magic of the seasons. This one delivers. I love all your details and how you described the autumn chill. A joy to read. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Thank you Cindy.
    I appreciate your time and review.
    Blessings
    Shirley