The Book of Fine Poetry
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Comment from karenina
Five family members have chosen suicide over saying help, giving us closure, allowing us the chance to call 911' FIVE! Do you know how that has torn my family apart? A gunshot through the mouth, carbon monoxide poisoning, a jump off a bridge, slashed wrists, a bottle of pills
This is my legacy.
What a pathetic state one must be in to KNOW the pain you will to your family. Depression can devour hope...
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Five family members have chosen suicide over saying help, giving us closure, allowing us the chance to call 911' FIVE! Do you know how that has torn my family apart? A gunshot through the mouth, carbon monoxide poisoning, a jump off a bridge, slashed wrists, a bottle of pills
This is my legacy.
What a pathetic state one must be in to KNOW the pain you will to your family. Depression can devour hope...
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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SORRY Karenina.
MY choice was a kitchen knife.
But, fortunately
for me...
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You're still standing. God must have a plan for you...perhaps sharing your pain, love, angst, and the miracle of organ donation is it!
Comment from Pamusart
Ricky, in your title I think you left the L out of love.
""She wondered why there was always water in Her Dream but She always awakens parched and So, So, thirsty?" ".
This happens to me. I dream about water and then wake up having to pee also. My meds make me thirsty all of the time.
""Her withered and almost dried and dead leaves and stem....
"Magically were renewed again?" "
I liked the imagery above.
There is one constant in life. Change. Just when you think you have figured it out, something changes. If you are flexible, you can handle it. If rigid, it causes
Problems. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Ricky, in your title I think you left the L out of love.
""She wondered why there was always water in Her Dream but She always awakens parched and So, So, thirsty?" ".
This happens to me. I dream about water and then wake up having to pee also. My meds make me thirsty all of the time.
""Her withered and almost dried and dead leaves and stem....
"Magically were renewed again?" "
I liked the imagery above.
There is one constant in life. Change. Just when you think you have figured it out, something changes. If you are flexible, you can handle it. If rigid, it causes
Problems. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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THANKS Pamusart.
I think that I ran out of room for the title but I will check.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from Bridget Myer
A heavy poem, to reflect a difficult reality.
Well written. Life is a journey full of simple pleasures, upsets and imbalances.
Time can bring for a new life a refreshed view, the difficulties become scars, reminding us of our trials and progress.
Were the ellipsis all part of the progress the unspoken words, emotions and feelings or just a stanza marker.
There were a lot of speech marks, whom was the speaker, the angels from above or you the author or an onlooker.
I did enjoy reading this piece.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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A heavy poem, to reflect a difficult reality.
Well written. Life is a journey full of simple pleasures, upsets and imbalances.
Time can bring for a new life a refreshed view, the difficulties become scars, reminding us of our trials and progress.
Were the ellipsis all part of the progress the unspoken words, emotions and feelings or just a stanza marker.
There were a lot of speech marks, whom was the speaker, the angels from above or you the author or an onlooker.
I did enjoy reading this piece.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Just my style Bridgett and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024
