Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This haibun about emotions, Happy?, lays out the list emotions and allows that the odds of happiness are 3 to 1 against. Seems maybe, as revealed in the haiku portion of the poem, that happiness is more subtle than anger, disgust, and fear. We need to embrace it and promote it.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thanks for reading and the reveiw zanya

Comment from Deb Kincaid

Excellent

I enjoyed the sentiment of this poem: happiness often is soft and gentle, not always raucous and loud. I'm a sucker for assonance, so love your s's and n's. (Not too sure of the word "innards," but it may be just right, too.) The poem is provocative, prompting reevaluation. Great job!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thanks for a really engaging review -enjoyed reading it zanya

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Haibun speaks about emotion of happiness, how it acts and affects a person and how it could be expressed in words as it is somewhat our heart's innards with subtle serenade within heart; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thanks fo r reading zanya

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

a very positive and uplifting poem. interesting style I intend to copy.
your poem is in a word: Happy. we need to check on who's making lists. my list is a lot different.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thanks for reading and review zanya

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

Excellent picture selection for the very well written poem that has lots and lots of imagery. I really enjoyed reading this poem.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thanks fo r reading zanya