Mousy Mischief
1-6-1 poetry6 total reviews
Comment from WalkerMan
The picture is funny in itself; but what you wrote about it is hilarious,
showing your clever imagination and poetic creativity. I usually reserve
extra stars for longer works with more "depth"; but you earned one here
for making me laugh on a dreary day. Superb.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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The picture is funny in itself; but what you wrote about it is hilarious,
showing your clever imagination and poetic creativity. I usually reserve
extra stars for longer works with more "depth"; but you earned one here
for making me laugh on a dreary day. Superb.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Awe Thanks Mike..glad it made you smile.
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You are most welcome, Susan. Congratulations on winning Third Place in the contest with a total of seven votes but only six reviews. -- Mike
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a fun approach to your 1-6-1 poem. I liked reading your lighthearted topic and enjoyed the photo to match your words. Thanks for bringing a smile. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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What a fun approach to your 1-6-1 poem. I liked reading your lighthearted topic and enjoyed the photo to match your words. Thanks for bringing a smile. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Cindy, thank you so much!!
Comment from Cheryl Baker
What an amazing picture. It presents your poem well and meets the requirements for the competition. "Mousy Mischief" is clever and amusing. I enjoy the rhyme.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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What an amazing picture. It presents your poem well and meets the requirements for the competition. "Mousy Mischief" is clever and amusing. I enjoy the rhyme.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Hi Cheryl! Thanks for the review! I do appreciate it!
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
A little horn playing mice. How delightfully cute and a amusing with a little humor. You met all the requirements of the contest and I wish you the best in this contest. THANKS for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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A little horn playing mice. How delightfully cute and a amusing with a little humor. You met all the requirements of the contest and I wish you the best in this contest. THANKS for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Thank you very much Mary!!! :-)
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My pleasure
Comment from Roxanne Barbour
Interesting poem.
However, I am not sure how this poem qualifies for a rhyming 1-6-1poem.
Should not then "Rat", "Rattus", and "Pack" rhyme?
Thanks for sharing.
Roxanne
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Interesting poem.
However, I am not sure how this poem qualifies for a rhyming 1-6-1poem.
Should not then "Rat", "Rattus", and "Pack" rhyme?
Thanks for sharing.
Roxanne
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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LOL I suppose it should! hahaha..ill rework it
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Omgoodnesss...that's for catching that! :-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is hilarious! Love the artwork and the take on the 'Rat Pack!', a clever 1-6-1 poem and such a lot of fun to read, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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This is hilarious! Love the artwork and the take on the 'Rat Pack!', a clever 1-6-1 poem and such a lot of fun to read, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Hey dolly..thanks for the review,,,I had to change the whole thing..LOL IT didn't rhyme !! hahaha the contest says...rhyme!! omgoodness!! thanks anyways.. :-))))))))))))))
