Precious Gems
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Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your fun and well rhymed verse tells a good story.
It might well be what aliens would think of us, should they ever come here.
Well done. Thank you for sharing this fun piece.
Sharon
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Your fun and well rhymed verse tells a good story.
It might well be what aliens would think of us, should they ever come here.
Well done. Thank you for sharing this fun piece.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Dear Sharon, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
This is a very intriguing and inquisitive poem. I like how you have used the aliens to tell the story and ask the questions about our planet. I wonder too if we have yet to learn even more about our universe...
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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This is a very intriguing and inquisitive poem. I like how you have used the aliens to tell the story and ask the questions about our planet. I wonder too if we have yet to learn even more about our universe...
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Dear Cindy, Thank you for your comments and review. I'm sure we have a lot more to learn about our universe. Dove
Comment from karenina
I am reminded of an old, old Twilight Zone episode in which aliens land on earth and seem to be there to share their more advanced life, eager to help we earthlings. We earthlings eventually begin accepting the wonderful opportunity to travel via their advanced spaceship to their superior planet. They leave a book with us called "To Serve Man"--it isn't until the first ship load of passengers are well into space that they discover "To Serve Man"...was a cookbook!
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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I am reminded of an old, old Twilight Zone episode in which aliens land on earth and seem to be there to share their more advanced life, eager to help we earthlings. We earthlings eventually begin accepting the wonderful opportunity to travel via their advanced spaceship to their superior planet. They leave a book with us called "To Serve Man"--it isn't until the first ship load of passengers are well into space that they discover "To Serve Man"...was a cookbook!
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review and story. Dove
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is a pretty good depiction of what aliens would probably think of our planet. I think that you sum it up with your words--why do you make things worse. You show the arrogance and selfishness of earthlings. Great job.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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This is a pretty good depiction of what aliens would probably think of our planet. I think that you sum it up with your words--why do you make things worse. You show the arrogance and selfishness of earthlings. Great job.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Debbie, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Roxanne Barbour
Some interesting questions aliens might ask are pointed out in your poem.
Perhaps too many in one poem?
How about trying a collection of poems about what aliens ask?
Just a thought.
Thanks for sharing.
Roxanne
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Some interesting questions aliens might ask are pointed out in your poem.
Perhaps too many in one poem?
How about trying a collection of poems about what aliens ask?
Just a thought.
Thanks for sharing.
Roxanne
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Roxanne, Thank you for your comments and review. I'll think about your suggestion. Dove
Comment from Air Spirit
This is an awesome poem. I love anything to do with extraterrestrial beings. I've never understood how we as humans could be so arrogant to think that we are the only Spiritual Beings in the world.. it makes no sense to me and we have so much proof out there that there is life beyond this planet. I love the type of questions that you raise that the aliens might ask us. Because if I were an alien I'd be asking the same questions!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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This is an awesome poem. I love anything to do with extraterrestrial beings. I've never understood how we as humans could be so arrogant to think that we are the only Spiritual Beings in the world.. it makes no sense to me and we have so much proof out there that there is life beyond this planet. I love the type of questions that you raise that the aliens might ask us. Because if I were an alien I'd be asking the same questions!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Air Spirit, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from apky
Well considering what goes along today as "world leaders", I bet these aliens are going to run away all by themselves. There's only so much stupidity an intelligent being can take.
We're more advanced than you, it's true
We've been on every planet in your galaxy
While you are only beginning to study Mars,
We have touched on the billions of stars
We come from the next universe,
Why on your planet do you make things worse?
Please accept us, we want to pleasantly converse
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Well considering what goes along today as "world leaders", I bet these aliens are going to run away all by themselves. There's only so much stupidity an intelligent being can take.
We're more advanced than you, it's true
We've been on every planet in your galaxy
While you are only beginning to study Mars,
We have touched on the billions of stars
We come from the next universe,
Why on your planet do you make things worse?
Please accept us, we want to pleasantly converse
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear apky, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the aliens from the next universe came with questions of our existence, survival and stake of survival at the increasing span of terrorism, they wish to have a pleasant conversation with us; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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This speaks the aliens from the next universe came with questions of our existence, survival and stake of survival at the increasing span of terrorism, they wish to have a pleasant conversation with us; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Alcreator, Thank you for our comments and review. Dove