Not Tonight, Sweetheart
In some ways, birds are like people.16 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
A very funny five-seven-five syllable poem about birds. You have not one wasted word, Your presentation is very well done and I really enjoyed the humor. Congratulations in placing in the contest.
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A very funny five-seven-five syllable poem about birds. You have not one wasted word, Your presentation is very well done and I really enjoyed the humor. Congratulations in placing in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
Comment from karenina
Hah! So it is not an excuse used only by the human species! Hey, if it's not a good d a y, the birdies won't play.....and if there's a fight trust one will take flight!
Karenina
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Hah! So it is not an excuse used only by the human species! Hey, if it's not a good d a y, the birdies won't play.....and if there's a fight trust one will take flight!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 about birds, Bad Timing, has the proper set up and finds the trouble in paradise as Ms Lovebird gives her soon-to-be ex the cold shoulder. I knew they wouldn't last a year.
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This 5-7-5 about birds, Bad Timing, has the proper set up and finds the trouble in paradise as Ms Lovebird gives her soon-to-be ex the cold shoulder. I knew they wouldn't last a year.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
Comment from angel123
You utilized your imagination well in writing this meaningful poem. I enjoyed reading it and it flows well with humor. I also like your artwork choice. Best wishes!
angel123
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You utilized your imagination well in writing this meaningful poem. I enjoyed reading it and it flows well with humor. I also like your artwork choice. Best wishes!
angel123
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Love your humorous approach to this writing prompt. What a funny entry for the bye bye blackbird contest. This is a great 5-7-5 poem that tells quite a tale of the lovebirds. Good luck.
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Love your humorous approach to this writing prompt. What a funny entry for the bye bye blackbird contest. This is a great 5-7-5 poem that tells quite a tale of the lovebirds. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
Comment from jaded831
You got my vote, your poem made me laugh. Any poem that can do that, gets thumbs up from me. Your picture compliments your work, and your poem is in perfect form. Goo luck with the contest. Thanks for sharing.
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You got my vote, your poem made me laugh. Any poem that can do that, gets thumbs up from me. Your picture compliments your work, and your poem is in perfect form. Goo luck with the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
Comment from nartoonla
LOL, that was good. Short and funny and indeed it could be true. Well done. The picture goes very well too and or is that what inspired you, or your own little tender birds?
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LOL, that was good. Short and funny and indeed it could be true. Well done. The picture goes very well too and or is that what inspired you, or your own little tender birds?
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really cute. I like the message that you've conveyed here. Those are beautiful birds. This is really cute and is a well written poem. Well done.
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This is really cute. I like the message that you've conveyed here. Those are beautiful birds. This is really cute and is a well written poem. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
Comment from Debra White
Hi :)
Your entry meets the criteria for the writing prompt.
- 5-7-5 syllable count
- about a bird / birds
I enjoy your humour (I also relate lol!) The presentation is nice also.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards, Debra :)
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Hi :)
Your entry meets the criteria for the writing prompt.
- 5-7-5 syllable count
- about a bird / birds
I enjoy your humour (I also relate lol!) The presentation is nice also.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards, Debra :)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
Comment from Sherman541
Love the picture and the 5/7/5 Bad Timing. Birds have feelings too. Great 5/7/5 Very clever and creative. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
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Love the picture and the 5/7/5 Bad Timing. Birds have feelings too. Great 5/7/5 Very clever and creative. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
