Precious Gems
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about goals. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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This is a very well written poem about goals. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I really like this poem describing the goal. You've wrote this beautifully and I love the way it rhymes and flows. It all fits together wonderfully and superbly. You've done a fine job with this well written poem. Well done Dove!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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I really like this poem describing the goal. You've wrote this beautifully and I love the way it rhymes and flows. It all fits together wonderfully and superbly. You've done a fine job with this well written poem. Well done Dove!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Jeffrey, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Hopes will rise and fill us with the expectation to forge ahead and reach out goal. A positive and uplifting write, I am sure this poem will help a some people, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Hopes will rise and fill us with the expectation to forge ahead and reach out goal. A positive and uplifting write, I am sure this poem will help a some people, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from nartoonla
That is true well written and said... Agree. And as stated it can be delayed as life makes other plans. One needs determination and if meant to be its there for you. And indeed one feels whole. Well done, enjoyed reading it all. But loved this most of all.
I sit down to make a goal,
If met, I consider myself whole
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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That is true well written and said... Agree. And as stated it can be delayed as life makes other plans. One needs determination and if meant to be its there for you. And indeed one feels whole. Well done, enjoyed reading it all. But loved this most of all.
I sit down to make a goal,
If met, I consider myself whole
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear nartoonla, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sherman541
Lovely visual, makes one think that they are escaping, at least long enough to see the world outside their own little realm. Beautifully written about setting a goal. Plans are made to change, Goals are set to keep and there can be long term or short term goals, as long as, you are able to keep them. If you set a goal, so far away or so heavy it cannot be reached, you will fail every time at reaching those goals. Sherman541
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Lovely visual, makes one think that they are escaping, at least long enough to see the world outside their own little realm. Beautifully written about setting a goal. Plans are made to change, Goals are set to keep and there can be long term or short term goals, as long as, you are able to keep them. If you set a goal, so far away or so heavy it cannot be reached, you will fail every time at reaching those goals. Sherman541
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Dear Sherman 541, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You are most welcome ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about setting goals and how to meet your set goals. After planning what you want to do, get everything you need together and start the project.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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A very well-written poem about setting goals and how to meet your set goals. After planning what you want to do, get everything you need together and start the project.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from karenina
Glad your out now and apparently doing better! If your writing is any indication you've made a remarkable recovery! It is difficult to set a goal. Most of us grab too much to achieve at once! For me, it's got to be broken down in little bits...
Goal one: Wake up
Goal two: Cofee (of course)
Goal three: select another simple goal....
(smile)
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Glad your out now and apparently doing better! If your writing is any indication you've made a remarkable recovery! It is difficult to set a goal. Most of us grab too much to achieve at once! For me, it's got to be broken down in little bits...
Goal one: Wake up
Goal two: Cofee (of course)
Goal three: select another simple goal....
(smile)
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. and telling me about your goals. Dove
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I need baby steps to get going..... :)