Precious Gems
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Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. I was the same way. I was quiet and painfully shy and very unsociable and very withdrawn. I like the way you inform the reader about your life. I can see myself in some of this. Great job and well done.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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I like this. I was the same way. I was quiet and painfully shy and very unsociable and very withdrawn. I like the way you inform the reader about your life. I can see myself in some of this. Great job and well done.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Jeffrey, Thank you for identifying with me, and thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Debbie Pope
Your poetry is powerful because it comes from the heart. I, Alone seems a fitting description for your life. That is so sad, but at the same time, it is encouraging. You seem to manage your life very well. Personally, I would be proud if I were you.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Your poetry is powerful because it comes from the heart. I, Alone seems a fitting description for your life. That is so sad, but at the same time, it is encouraging. You seem to manage your life very well. Personally, I would be proud if I were you.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Debbie, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is sadness in these words and the emotion here is of such loneliness. I am sorry that your life has brought this sadness and we cannot change our personality, but we can change our attitude to life, you evoked emotion in me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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There is sadness in these words and the emotion here is of such loneliness. I am sorry that your life has brought this sadness and we cannot change our personality, but we can change our attitude to life, you evoked emotion in me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Elizabeth Joanne
This poem is quite sad in nature, however quite revealing intimately as well. Very nice work here. Your words paint a very vivd picture in my mind. Good luck and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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This poem is quite sad in nature, however quite revealing intimately as well. Very nice work here. Your words paint a very vivd picture in my mind. Good luck and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Elizabeth Joanne, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh, I do hope things are much better now. You write lovely things, this is well done with much expression. I too was shy and didn't have many friends. My report card said I played alone but mom didn't seem to be worried. I didn't mind it though. Maybe I was a weird kid. I have many friends now, wonderful friends so I hope you do to. Don't be alone. I would be happy to be a friend.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Oh, I do hope things are much better now. You write lovely things, this is well done with much expression. I too was shy and didn't have many friends. My report card said I played alone but mom didn't seem to be worried. I didn't mind it though. Maybe I was a weird kid. I have many friends now, wonderful friends so I hope you do to. Don't be alone. I would be happy to be a friend.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Roxanna, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem. Our dreams are to have our own family that we can look after when we are grown up and hope to make our children and look after husband the best we can.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. Our dreams are to have our own family that we can look after when we are grown up and hope to make our children and look after husband the best we can.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from karenina
I am sorry you had this experience. Seems God blessed you with the uncanny ability to write beautifully and reach many more poet friends than you ever thought possible back when you and your doll sat alone. Your words touch me.
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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I am sorry you had this experience. Seems God blessed you with the uncanny ability to write beautifully and reach many more poet friends than you ever thought possible back when you and your doll sat alone. Your words touch me.
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. It's true, I do have a lot of friends on Fan Story now. Dove
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Funny, isn't it, how when you surround yourself with people of similar interests, friendships blossom!
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Yes Karenina, friendships blossom like the spring which I hope will soon get here (in New England)! Dove
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Amen!
Comment from LIJ Red
Only child on an isolated farm, I was forced to be a loner. I changed all that when I grew up but when I grew old, deaths brought the loneliness back. I was ready for it.
An excellent autobiographical poem.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Only child on an isolated farm, I was forced to be a loner. I changed all that when I grew up but when I grew old, deaths brought the loneliness back. I was ready for it.
An excellent autobiographical poem.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Der LIJRed, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove