Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

The first paragraph that introduces the six parakeets was eye-catching and makes you want to read what the little tweeters are up to. Many twists and turns, and humor thrown in for good measure. Bet the cat enjoyed "Red". After all, he and "Green" do go way back. Well done.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018

Thanks, Brett, for the excellent review. I liked this one. Bill

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

But the collective for parakeets and budgies is chatter or sometimes clatter, and crows fly in murders...excellent script.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018

Also a prattle. The title should be ironic as the birds are being murdered. Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a good scene with the various parakeets having a meeting.
I suppose that's about how the meeting would go.
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018

Thanks, Sharon

Comment from Michael Steinert

Excellent

Damnit Bill, You did it again. This was a very funny tale with many twists and turns. I thoroughly enjoyable, fun read. Also takes me back to my college days in Hyde park where we have a parakeet problem.

Have a great day!
Mike

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018

Thanks, Mike

Comment from apky

Excellent

As always, Bill, priceless.

I had some crazy vivid images of a bunch of parakeets in Washington, on the branches of a tree called Casa Blanca.
I had laughs to last me this whole weekend.

Oh, uh, about the check - we stopped having them over here from the beginning of the century. It's either cards or PayPal!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018

Washington and Tweet City are the same place. Everyone pays in cash there. (Not as traceable)

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

Definitely one of the better scripts I've read. A murder of parakeets is definitely more vicious than a murder of crows, and far more entertaining. Nice twist at the end with Green feeding Red to the cat!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018

Thanks, Brenda

reply by brenda faye curtis on 14-Apr-2018

You're welcome, Bill.

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

Oh, no! That darn cat! Where did that red feather come from? :) I loved the banter the parakeets seem to have. The dialog is good. A dark bird comedy!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018

Thanks, Cindy

Comment from antonieta

Excellent

I enjoyed to read your script. It's very original and has f humour. Yes why lose time on meetings I often asked myself. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018

Thanks, Antonieta, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello, Bill,

Good little play. My favorite parts (funny as hell):

Purple: I called you together to plan a removal. We are going to eliminate the cat.
Red: Did he say we were going to incriminate Pat?

(Lights go up a few seconds later. From a rustling bush a cat steps out with bright RED feathers in its mouth.)

Take care,
Nome

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018

Thanks, Rasmine

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

LOL!! That was so funny!! And the new guy was left on his own after he'd fed his friend the cat! LOL! That is so cruel, but sooo funny. Well done! :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018

Thanks, Sandra