Give me a kiss
Little siblings12 total reviews
Comment from Cheryl Baker
What a sweet little poem. such a well chosen helps to present your poem really well. "Give me a kiss" has the correct syllable count for the competition and I enjoyed the rhyme which is consistent throughout.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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What a sweet little poem. such a well chosen helps to present your poem really well. "Give me a kiss" has the correct syllable count for the competition and I enjoyed the rhyme which is consistent throughout.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much for your great review. Jen.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Kerry Foley
Awe... this is such a sweet little 1-6-1 poem, my friend. The beautiful innocence of children is precious. Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Awe... this is such a sweet little 1-6-1 poem, my friend. The beautiful innocence of children is precious. Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much Kerry.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Cute little picture with Earth Tone colors which makes it a display innocence. Especially with the use of little children, that seems to add the uniqueness to the poem. Very good combination.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Cute little picture with Earth Tone colors which makes it a display innocence. Especially with the use of little children, that seems to add the uniqueness to the poem. Very good combination.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much Mary for your comments.
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My pleasure
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My pleasure
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Give Me a Kiss, uses the eight syllables and uni-rhyme lines to bring a little harmony to the siblings who may one day be each other's best and closest friend. That's the good scenario.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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This 1-6-1, Give Me a Kiss, uses the eight syllables and uni-rhyme lines to bring a little harmony to the siblings who may one day be each other's best and closest friend. That's the good scenario.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your comments
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really cute. It reminds me of the times when I was a young lad that the neighbor girl an I would sneak in the closet to play house. You brought the memories back with this one. I enjoyed reading this. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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This is really cute. It reminds me of the times when I was a young lad that the neighbor girl an I would sneak in the closet to play house. You brought the memories back with this one. I enjoyed reading this. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much for your comments.
Comment from lyenochka
Adorable little picture. But would a brother and sis really consider it "bliss" to "kiss?" I'm thinking of my little grandchildren and can't imagine it. Lol. Great construction for this constricted format and great choice of rhymes!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Adorable little picture. But would a brother and sis really consider it "bliss" to "kiss?" I'm thinking of my little grandchildren and can't imagine it. Lol. Great construction for this constricted format and great choice of rhymes!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt.
Your short verse is very cute.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt.
Your short verse is very cute.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Marisela Contona
This piece is a very sweet one. Your color scheme, and image are cute and fun for this work. I look forward to more of your work.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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This piece is a very sweet one. Your color scheme, and image are cute and fun for this work. I look forward to more of your work.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Many thanks for your comments
Comment from EverInParadise
Nicely done and what a great piece of art to go with your clever lines. I realize these type poems may look and sound simple, but in truth it takes your type of talent to pull it off this well. Thank you, it is a fun read.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Nicely done and what a great piece of art to go with your clever lines. I realize these type poems may look and sound simple, but in truth it takes your type of talent to pull it off this well. Thank you, it is a fun read.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your great review
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Very cute. Writing a 1-6-1 is a challenge, but you've pulled it off for this contest. What a fun topic you've chosen too. You followed the syllable and rhyming pattern it calls for too. Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Very cute. Writing a 1-6-1 is a challenge, but you've pulled it off for this contest. What a fun topic you've chosen too. You followed the syllable and rhyming pattern it calls for too. Good luck to you.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your great review