He Should Have Held His Tongue
Hell hath no fury like a woman called fat.6 total reviews
Comment from Cheryl Baker
Clever poem. Gave me a good laugh. Fantastic picture. So much said in a few words. "He should have held his tongue" is written in the correct format for the competition. Well done.
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Clever poem. Gave me a good laugh. Fantastic picture. So much said in a few words. "He should have held his tongue" is written in the correct format for the competition. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
You get a 55 for that lol the best thing that you can do is compliment a woman even when she's not looking her best find something positive to say. And when you say things like look like you gain weight you have cross the line to Danger. From the airport when you're asked what is your address mister you say dog house LOL
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You get a 55 for that lol the best thing that you can do is compliment a woman even when she's not looking her best find something positive to say. And when you say things like look like you gain weight you have cross the line to Danger. From the airport when you're asked what is your address mister you say dog house LOL
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
Comment from Air Spirit
I loved it! Boy, calling your partner fat, is like throwing the gauntlet down! Very clever and we'll written poem and good 1-6-1 syllable 3 line poem!
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I loved it! Boy, calling your partner fat, is like throwing the gauntlet down! Very clever and we'll written poem and good 1-6-1 syllable 3 line poem!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
Comment from karenina
Men who demean have very small.
Egos.
So they make themselves taller by putting others down.
You make a GOOD point.
Hope those who need the wisdom read this!
Karenina
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Men who demean have very small.
Egos.
So they make themselves taller by putting others down.
You make a GOOD point.
Hope those who need the wisdom read this!
Karenina
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I am ever amazed how someone can be limited to so few words a line patterns and deliver such powerful messages. This is especially amusing to me as having been bullied for my size. Those of us who have been called fat and those who would champion us will absolutely love this poem. Perfect. Thank you.
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I am ever amazed how someone can be limited to so few words a line patterns and deliver such powerful messages. This is especially amusing to me as having been bullied for my size. Those of us who have been called fat and those who would champion us will absolutely love this poem. Perfect. Thank you.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
Comment from Michael Steinert
Haha, This is a very humorous entry for the 1-6-1 poem and I imagine it will do well in the contest. The picture is also very appropriate. Best of luck!
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Haha, This is a very humorous entry for the 1-6-1 poem and I imagine it will do well in the contest. The picture is also very appropriate. Best of luck!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018