Precious Gems
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Spring Storm"Na-po-wri-mo
8 total reviews
Comment from meeshu
great idea, a tree's eye view of spring. well conceived and well written. a pleasant poem about an angry tree. very good, Dove. good luck in the monthly contest......meeshu
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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great idea, a tree's eye view of spring. well conceived and well written. a pleasant poem about an angry tree. very good, Dove. good luck in the monthly contest......meeshu
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Dear meeshu, Thank you for your comments, review and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Harry Smith
I really like the presentation of this poem. The picture selection is excellent and the poem is excellently well written with lots and lots of imagery.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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I really like the presentation of this poem. The picture selection is excellent and the poem is excellently well written with lots and lots of imagery.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Dear Harry, Thank you for your comments and review. DoveDear Ci
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a perfect poem to explain what so many of us are feeling too. Come on Spring! I loved your word choices throughout and your rhyming pattern flowed effortlessly. A joy to read.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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What a perfect poem to explain what so many of us are feeling too. Come on Spring! I loved your word choices throughout and your rhyming pattern flowed effortlessly. A joy to read.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Dear Cindy, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from robyn corum
DM,
Just when we think it's alllllmost over... plunk! Another wash of cold weather and frost or (in your case) snow. It has been a strange winter, that's for sure. But, eventually, you're right, spring WILL win!! HUZZAH!
Thanks!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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DM,
Just when we think it's alllllmost over... plunk! Another wash of cold weather and frost or (in your case) snow. It has been a strange winter, that's for sure. But, eventually, you're right, spring WILL win!! HUZZAH!
Thanks!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
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Dear robyn, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about snow falling when we think spring should be here. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work. I have come to understand that when I look at the weather these days I know that the Lord is in control. I may want snow here where we live, but God has better plans for the day than I do. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your work! love, Teri
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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This is a very well written poem about snow falling when we think spring should be here. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work. I have come to understand that when I look at the weather these days I know that the Lord is in control. I may want snow here where we live, but God has better plans for the day than I do. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your work! love, Teri
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Donna
Comment from karenina
Now hear is a poem a nd a promise... Though it be late, spring indeed will surely shine its rays and melt the las vestiges of winter from our too frigid days!
Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Now hear is a poem a nd a promise... Though it be late, spring indeed will surely shine its rays and melt the las vestiges of winter from our too frigid days!
Karenina
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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Welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I hope so! And your spring write gives hope to all those waiting for those warmer spring days. My favourite lines: "Gazing up at the sky with blossoms and branches.
When all of a sudden comes this howling sound." Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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I hope so! And your spring write gives hope to all those waiting for those warmer spring days. My favourite lines: "Gazing up at the sky with blossoms and branches.
When all of a sudden comes this howling sound." Love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. It seems the seasons are a bit confused and don't get their timinh quite rirght. Winter holds on for too long and Spring doesn't seem to get get foot inside the door.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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A very well-written poem. It seems the seasons are a bit confused and don't get their timinh quite rirght. Winter holds on for too long and Spring doesn't seem to get get foot inside the door.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove