Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Might as well by a recording of birds. If she buys another, it will just do the same if she allows it on her shoulder. At first I thought you were talking about having three birds, then I realized you meant three poems. Great work with the monorhyme and format. Cute picture. judi

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018

It actually was three birds, but others thought the same thing. The poem?s too short for details.

reply by judiverse on 09-Apr-2018

The other birds are also likely to shit on her shoulder. Maybe she can keep them off. judi

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Ah me. Will they never learn? If you crap on me I will bury you and replace you with another who looks just like you so I will not even have to miss you. This is also a great object lesson for my children. Watch and learn.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018

So far they have not learned.

reply by nomi338 on 09-Apr-2018

Uh, oh.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Okay, what can I say about this being an animal lover? Hmmmm. Three lines rhymes and picture is charming. Lines 2,3, and 4 true. You are on a roll. Marilyn

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

Thanks, Marilyn

Comment from Katya

Excellent

Harrumph! If you let them sit on your shoulder, then off them for pooping, you're going to go through a lot of birds. No fair!!
Nice poem, though, and good picture.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

Thanks, Katya

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ha, so is this a counting poem in slow motion then, Bill? If so I must say I always thought you were a genius, and this is proof positive.

Poor, poor troiakeets.

Great job. I quite enjoyed.

Gloria

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

Thanks, Gloria

Comment from Michael Steinert

Excellent

Excellent as I really didn't expect a part three after the tragic end in part two. It does sound like they had a properly burial. May #3 have a better run. Great fun poem.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

Thanks, Michael

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Writer is seems that you a parakeet lover and there's nothing wrong with that. The drawing is so practical and demonstrates the writing that you written about and so now with the parakeet on your shoulder and it seems like one died and was put in a shoebox for a coffin, if I interpreted that correctly, but now you're on parakeet number 3. Good luck with that

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

Thanks, Mary

reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 08-Apr-2018

My pleasure

reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 09-Apr-2018

My pleasure

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

haahahah I like your poems which always make me laugh. This is very witty and well written. Great word choices and the pic really suits the poem. A very proficient Cinquain. I saw no errors and thanks for another entertaining read, Ana.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

Thanks, Ana

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Um? Wait, why did the bird die? Hope it didn't have anything to do with the "parakeet turd." Sounds rather unhealthy to keep buying parakeets if the necessity to bury them is so frequent. Good rhyming in the middle lines.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

Thanks, Lyenochka