Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

I really like the presentation. The picture selection really complimented the poem that is very well written with lots and lots of imager an emotions as well. The reader enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

Thanks ever so much Harry and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from karenina

Excellent

If you believe, as I do, that Jason is in God's heaven and is looking down upon you right now...why oh why would you make him sad? Do you think for one moment he would want you to harm yourself? Kill yourself? Would you want that of him if your positions were opposite what they are now? Jason, may I be so bold to say, is joyfully remembering that Dad on the beach with him...laughing and smiling and drinking in the joy that he is. Not WAS. IS. Not every poem should be a dirge, my friend. Do you not want him to realize the sheer bliss it was to have him, even though he was taken too soon? Can you not TRY to celebrate his LIFE rather than bemoan his death?

For his sake.
For your sake.
For GOD's SAKE.

Celebrate his LIFE!


Karenina

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

Some of poertry's best come with loss, want, and grief.
That was what I was portraying.
As for Heaven, need, and happiness.
To understand this you need to first live it.
Dr Ricky 1024