The Promise to Grandma
Final Words contest entry7 total reviews
Comment from Susan Burger
This is great! No wonder you won this contest! I love that you took a light hearted approach! I took a much darker one and yours is so much more fun! Great work and congratulations on your first place win!
Susan
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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This is great! No wonder you won this contest! I love that you took a light hearted approach! I took a much darker one and yours is so much more fun! Great work and congratulations on your first place win!
Susan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the great review and congrats, Susan. Yeah, I don't know why but it seems every time I try to serious or darker I never do very well in the booths. So I go with a lot of silly stuff on here. Thank you again. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great night.
Ron
Comment from Cheryl Baker
Sad, strangely funny little story. It is well written and explains the last moments of the Grandma dying. I laughed at Grandmas last words. I guess we all know how she felt.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Sad, strangely funny little story. It is well written and explains the last moments of the Grandma dying. I laughed at Grandmas last words. I guess we all know how she felt.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Cheryl. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
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You're welcome.
Comment from l.raven
this is way to funny...I love what she asked...
so very well thought of...made me laugh...
let me see...it could be many women on here...LOL...
good luck in the contest...very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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this is way to funny...I love what she asked...
so very well thought of...made me laugh...
let me see...it could be many women on here...LOL...
good luck in the contest...very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Linda. Yeah, I was just in one of those moods, lol. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great weekend.
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you are so very welcome...you have a great week...love xxoo
Comment from RodG
It's a shame "Grandma" is gone. FanStory can't afford to lose such feisty members. A delightful story which pokes light-hearted fun at TV melodrama and this site.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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It's a shame "Grandma" is gone. FanStory can't afford to lose such feisty members. A delightful story which pokes light-hearted fun at TV melodrama and this site.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Rod. I was just in one of those moods. Haha. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly thing. Have a great weekend.
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This was fun to read on a chilly April day. Rod
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks grandma died after a promise that her grandson would answer the reviews to her last Fanstory post, by teaching those bastard reviewers a good lesson for their rating her works with FOUR STARS; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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This speaks grandma died after a promise that her grandson would answer the reviews to her last Fanstory post, by teaching those bastard reviewers a good lesson for their rating her works with FOUR STARS; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the great review, DR Alcreator. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness. I was just in one of those moods. Haha
Comment from beizanten
A simple yet well written beginning that make people want to read more. the emotion of the character came strong bringing them and the story to life. what a weird and funny last word despite the situation it make me smile. I love it!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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A simple yet well written beginning that make people want to read more. the emotion of the character came strong bringing them and the story to life. what a weird and funny last word despite the situation it make me smile. I love it!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Wow, thank you so much, beizanten. I never figured I'd see a big sixer for this silly thing. I was just in one of those moods. Haha. I really appreciate the fantastic review and the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Thank you again and have a great weekend.
Comment from Bill Schott
This short story, Final Words, is hilarious and may actually have happened. The grave hospital scene is wildly blown open with this instruction from the failing matron. So funny.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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This short story, Final Words, is hilarious and may actually have happened. The grave hospital scene is wildly blown open with this instruction from the failing matron. So funny.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Bill. I was just in one of those moods. Haha. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly thing. Have a great weekend.
