The Secret of the Rose
A Kyrielle16 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
I can't imagine giving this anything less than six stars. It is not only beautifully put together, but it truly speaks to my heart. It has the emotion portrayed with such skill, creating a work of art that is a genuine pleasure to read. I loved everything about it. It couldn't be better.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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I can't imagine giving this anything less than six stars. It is not only beautifully put together, but it truly speaks to my heart. It has the emotion portrayed with such skill, creating a work of art that is a genuine pleasure to read. I loved everything about it. It couldn't be better.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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I?m woefully late in responding to your lovely response to my poem, The Secret of the Rose. I appreciated your affirming comments and the six stars. Many thanks!
Comment from Gloria ....
Well I'd have to say I have no idea how I missed this delightful poem. Anytime there's a rose involved you can count me in.
A beautiful kyrielle and exceptional poetry.
Gloria
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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Well I'd have to say I have no idea how I missed this delightful poem. Anytime there's a rose involved you can count me in.
A beautiful kyrielle and exceptional poetry.
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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I?m woefully late in responding to your lovely response to my poem, The Secret of the Rose. I appreciated your affirming comments. Many thanks!
Comment from sunnilicious
The rose is a very romantic flower, but it takes a poet like yourself to expose it. Well thought out and nicely written. I like your narrative storytelling voice personality. Sly fox you. Great story in a poem. Nice work.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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The rose is a very romantic flower, but it takes a poet like yourself to expose it. Well thought out and nicely written. I like your narrative storytelling voice personality. Sly fox you. Great story in a poem. Nice work.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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I?m woefully late in responding to your lovely response to my poem, The Secret of the Rose. I appreciated your affirming comments. Many thanks! Tony.
Comment from jdrhye
Nicely articulated. I like the rhyme and rhythm. It flows nicely. As the poem unfolds so does the story. Its very telling. It reads well and is fast paced and clever. Well done.
J
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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Nicely articulated. I like the rhyme and rhythm. It flows nicely. As the poem unfolds so does the story. Its very telling. It reads well and is fast paced and clever. Well done.
J
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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I?m woefully late in responding to your lovely response to my poem, The Secret of the Rose. I appreciated your affirming comments and the six stars . Many thanks! Tony
Comment from Writeling
I've read this a few times because it is so pleasing in its journey, only to give the punch at the end. I love the play on 'kid gloves' which dangles before the reader to 'get' and how your scan pattern is true to the form. I particularly admire:
'Her petals fall, her heart's exposed,'
With best wishes, Writeling
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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I've read this a few times because it is so pleasing in its journey, only to give the punch at the end. I love the play on 'kid gloves' which dangles before the reader to 'get' and how your scan pattern is true to the form. I particularly admire:
'Her petals fall, her heart's exposed,'
With best wishes, Writeling
Comment Written 01-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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I?m woefully late in responding to your lovely response to my poem, The Secret of the Rose. I appreciated your affirming comments and the six stars . Many thanks!
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
And the secret of the Rose is so obvious of its smell of its beauty of his Splendor when it's open up it captivates the mind because of its very appearance. I thank you for sharing about the roles and the different facets of it the rose picture is very nice as well thank you again
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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And the secret of the Rose is so obvious of its smell of its beauty of his Splendor when it's open up it captivates the mind because of its very appearance. I thank you for sharing about the roles and the different facets of it the rose picture is very nice as well thank you again
Comment Written 01-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Hi, Mary. I wish that there was an easy way of viewing reviews in reverse order! This, along with several others, has been buried beneath an incoming tide caused by my having posted three or four poems in quick succession! Apologies for the delay in responding.
I really appreciated your kind comments about my poem, "The Secret of the Rose". Many thanks!
Best wishes, Tony
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My pleasure Tony
Comment from Angela Post
Wow that was one powerful rose! I enjoyed your kyrielle and things moved along very quickly there. You told the story well. The art work also is fitting for the poem.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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Wow that was one powerful rose! I enjoyed your kyrielle and things moved along very quickly there. You told the story well. The art work also is fitting for the poem.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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I?m woefully late in responding to your lovely response to my poem, The Secret of the Rose. I appreciated your affirming comments. Many thanks!
Comment from Harry Smith
Beautifully written is this poem with lots of imagery and emotions. The picture selection is perfect for this poem. I rally enjoyed the read. Have a great Easter.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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Beautifully written is this poem with lots of imagery and emotions. The picture selection is perfect for this poem. I rally enjoyed the read. Have a great Easter.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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I?m woefully late in responding to your lovely response to my poem, The Secret of the Rose. I appreciated your affirming comments. Many thanks!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Write A Kyrielle' writing prompt.
Your verse tells clearly of your and future child. Well done.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Write A Kyrielle' writing prompt.
Your verse tells clearly of your and future child. Well done.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Hi, Sharon. I wish that there was an easy way of viewing reviews in reverse order! This, along with several others, has been buried beneath an incoming tide caused by my having posted three or four poems in quick succession! Apologies for the delay in responding.
I really appreciated your kind comments about my poem, "The Secret of the Rose". Many thanks!
Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Kyrielle. An excellent repeating line that ends each stanza. The rose is a special flower that holds her secrets between the petals for us to discover.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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A very well-written Kyrielle. An excellent repeating line that ends each stanza. The rose is a special flower that holds her secrets between the petals for us to discover.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Hi Sandra. I seems that this one got stuck at the bottom of my inbox - written more than a month ago in response to my poem "The Secret of the Rose". Many thanks fr it and sorry for the late reply.
