To Feel the Robin's Song
Kyrielle Contest Entry52 total reviews
Comment from Tootie
This is absolutely beautiful. Well written. I loved it! Great presentation. Wishing you the best in the contest. I'm looking forward to hearing the robins sing again. Spring! God Bless.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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This is absolutely beautiful. Well written. I loved it! Great presentation. Wishing you the best in the contest. I'm looking forward to hearing the robins sing again. Spring! God Bless.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hello Tootie!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
Spring is not too far away; I promise!
Comment from Janilou
A lovely poem. I don't know much about the way different types of poetry are formatted, so I will just accept that you know what you are doing and that it is correct.
I like the reference to the the robin. It's beautiful.
All the best in the contest.
Jan
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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A lovely poem. I don't know much about the way different types of poetry are formatted, so I will just accept that you know what you are doing and that it is correct.
I like the reference to the the robin. It's beautiful.
All the best in the contest.
Jan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hi Janilou!!
Thank you for your vote of confidence = all systems/rules/syllabic count are "go!" :)
Thank you also for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
Comment from zanya
This Kyrielle celebrates the simple pleasures of Nature -the Robin's song - a joy and a delight and an inspiration, juxtaposed with possible other special moments 'dine with Kings' which may never be realised but which can never compare with the song of the Robin
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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This Kyrielle celebrates the simple pleasures of Nature -the Robin's song - a joy and a delight and an inspiration, juxtaposed with possible other special moments 'dine with Kings' which may never be realised but which can never compare with the song of the Robin
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hello zanya,
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review.
So appreciated...
Comment from tfawcus
The beauty and unfailing cheerfulness of the robin's song can wean us away from the worst of our sorrows and compensate for many missed advantures and lost opportunities. Your poem makes the point well. Good luck in the contest - one of the stronger entries.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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The beauty and unfailing cheerfulness of the robin's song can wean us away from the worst of our sorrows and compensate for many missed advantures and lost opportunities. Your poem makes the point well. Good luck in the contest - one of the stronger entries.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hello Friend,
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
So appreciated...
Comment from ameen786
Bravo! I too feel the Robin's song my friend; thank you for sharing this wonderful poem in lovely/meaningful verses and excellent/perfect rhyming; a true delight; good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Bravo! I too feel the Robin's song my friend; thank you for sharing this wonderful poem in lovely/meaningful verses and excellent/perfect rhyming; a true delight; good luck!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hello Friend!
So pleased that you enjoy!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
Comment from Debbie Pope
I am mightily impressed with your poem. Your rhymes are good and the lines transition well. I particularly like the words you chose to rhyme with song. Sarong makes me envision an exciting, exotic lifestyle. Belong makes the reader aware that nature comforts you when you feel alone. The ecstasy you feel with the robin's song is even more important than belonging. And your use of strong indicates that nature compensates for physical weakness. All together they contribute to an excellent message. And you did it all under such writing restrictions.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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I am mightily impressed with your poem. Your rhymes are good and the lines transition well. I particularly like the words you chose to rhyme with song. Sarong makes me envision an exciting, exotic lifestyle. Belong makes the reader aware that nature comforts you when you feel alone. The ecstasy you feel with the robin's song is even more important than belonging. And your use of strong indicates that nature compensates for physical weakness. All together they contribute to an excellent message. And you did it all under such writing restrictions.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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I am mighty impressed with your review, Debbie!
Oh my goodness!
You saw right through me! Smiles all around!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
Still smiling!
Comment from Susan Chetcuti
Your poem brings a warmth to it, To Feel The Robin's Song. I really enjoyed reading it and the rhyme was well done. Very well written and enchanting, well done and Happy Easter.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Your poem brings a warmth to it, To Feel The Robin's Song. I really enjoyed reading it and the rhyme was well done. Very well written and enchanting, well done and Happy Easter.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hello Susan!
So pleased you enjoyed!
I loved the challenge of penning this Kyrielle!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
Happy Easter to you and yours!
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written Kyrielle my friend an outstanding entry in this Kyrielle contest, the repeated refrain line, " but I have felt the Robyn's song" was very affective in balancing out and giving substance to the rest of this aabb rhymed tetrametric quatrains, well done, great entry, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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A beautifully written Kyrielle my friend an outstanding entry in this Kyrielle contest, the repeated refrain line, " but I have felt the Robyn's song" was very affective in balancing out and giving substance to the rest of this aabb rhymed tetrametric quatrains, well done, great entry, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hello Roy!
So pleased that you enjoy!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
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Most welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This poem touched my heart! Such strong emotion and I loved the flow, the rhymes and most of all the sentiments, I wish I had a six for you, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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This poem touched my heart! Such strong emotion and I loved the flow, the rhymes and most of all the sentiments, I wish I had a six for you, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hello Dolly!
So very pleased that you enjoy!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Kyrielle with a strong repeating line that flows naturally from the previous lines to bring everything together with good rhyming.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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A very well-written Kyrielle with a strong repeating line that flows naturally from the previous lines to bring everything together with good rhyming.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hello Sandra,
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
