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Viewing comments for Chapter 169 "Jellyfish World 6"Animal poetry and short stories
10 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
Sorry, I couldn't make more than a C in biology. Maybe that was because I didn't try? You get your rhyme in and make it interesting. Excellent description, as borne out in the artwork. They look like parachutes that have, fortunately, opened. Good strategy to use color to make your rhyme and key words stand out. judi
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Sorry, I couldn't make more than a C in biology. Maybe that was because I didn't try? You get your rhyme in and make it interesting. Excellent description, as borne out in the artwork. They look like parachutes that have, fortunately, opened. Good strategy to use color to make your rhyme and key words stand out. judi
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Judi
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from frogbook
And so you educate us a bit on science day as well as offering a lovely picture of a fascinating creature. Whenever I see them I am mesmerized and can't stop watching.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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And so you educate us a bit on science day as well as offering a lovely picture of a fascinating creature. Whenever I see them I am mesmerized and can't stop watching.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thanks, FB
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Bill. Colorful, original, and clever. Good rhyming and you use unique form in your amusing pieces. These make an interesting visual presentation. Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Hi Bill. Colorful, original, and clever. Good rhyming and you use unique form in your amusing pieces. These make an interesting visual presentation. Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Marilyn, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting science poem, Bill. You've selected some unique rhymes : substance with suspense and cnidocytes with sea fights. Amazing that these brain-less creatures can get into fights or even "secure prey!"
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Interesting science poem, Bill. You've selected some unique rhymes : substance with suspense and cnidocytes with sea fights. Amazing that these brain-less creatures can get into fights or even "secure prey!"
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thanks, lyenochka.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the devouring world of jellyfish, how they do live under sea and fight for survival; well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING -DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This speaks about the devouring world of jellyfish, how they do live under sea and fight for survival; well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING -DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great poem with good factual info woven in. The picture is fitting. I learned a couple things about jellyfish, too. One thin is to stay far away from their stinging tentacles or even those washed up on the beach. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This is a great poem with good factual info woven in. The picture is fitting. I learned a couple things about jellyfish, too. One thin is to stay far away from their stinging tentacles or even those washed up on the beach. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from nomi338
Interesting facts about the jellyfish. I can't help thinking of an insult I learned as a child, it was usually hurled at someone who was obese, "It must be jelly because jam don't shake like that."
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Interesting facts about the jellyfish. I can't help thinking of an insult I learned as a child, it was usually hurled at someone who was obese, "It must be jelly because jam don't shake like that."
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I?ve heard that describe a woman?s bottom as a compliment.
Comment from Cybertron1986
I wish I can see these kind of pieces when I visit the aquarium. Inviting and educational at the same time. Appropriate and creative expression equals an overall appealing poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I wish I can see these kind of pieces when I visit the aquarium. Inviting and educational at the same time. Appropriate and creative expression equals an overall appealing poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Cy
Comment from jusylee72
Well, that is new knowledge I never had before. Some scientific new words to learn. I always love new vocabulary. Nature is fascinating and I appreciate you telling us about it in the form of a poem.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Well, that is new knowledge I never had before. Some scientific new words to learn. I always love new vocabulary. Nature is fascinating and I appreciate you telling us about it in the form of a poem.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thanks, jusylee
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
They look suspended and their jelly substance could sting and it can be nasty. I have almost put my foot on them and it is scary! Love the flow of your poem and the great artwork too, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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They look suspended and their jelly substance could sting and it can be nasty. I have almost put my foot on them and it is scary! Love the flow of your poem and the great artwork too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Dolly