A Magical Meeting
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "A Magical Meeting"Who was that?
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Comment from nartoonla
HI, That was really enjoyable to read and all along I wondered what the sound could be, tell me the wind...? And when you return to the magical spot, be sure you take me, what a lovely place.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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HI, That was really enjoyable to read and all along I wondered what the sound could be, tell me the wind...? And when you return to the magical spot, be sure you take me, what a lovely place.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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It's a date. Thank you for this delightful review.
Comment from JennaG
Wow! Great job with the Triquatrain form! Beautiful internal rhyming and I love the story told here. It's soothing, intriguing, and mysterious all at the same time. Loved it! Well done! :)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Wow! Great job with the Triquatrain form! Beautiful internal rhyming and I love the story told here. It's soothing, intriguing, and mysterious all at the same time. Loved it! Well done! :)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Jenna. What a wonderful review!
Comment from Swampfox1
I like the type of poem and what you did with it. great job for sure. I looked around. What made this sound
that plays for me alone?
'Twas nothing weird when he appeared
upon a mossy stone.." Pretty cool. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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I like the type of poem and what you did with it. great job for sure. I looked around. What made this sound
that plays for me alone?
'Twas nothing weird when he appeared
upon a mossy stone.." Pretty cool. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reviewing. Much appreciated.
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you're welcome.
Comment from Susan Burger
This is a very catchy poem in rhyme and cadence. I love the premise. The picture lends itself to an enchanted place where such an occurrence could take place! You did an excellent job with the triquatrain format. Thanks for sharing this lovely piece.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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This is a very catchy poem in rhyme and cadence. I love the premise. The picture lends itself to an enchanted place where such an occurrence could take place! You did an excellent job with the triquatrain format. Thanks for sharing this lovely piece.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from Waishali Deshmukh
Its such a delightful reading. I loved the imagery, rhymes, presentation and the artwork. Its really refreshing and transmitted the joy you felt after the magical meeting. Excellent work!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Its such a delightful reading. I loved the imagery, rhymes, presentation and the artwork. Its really refreshing and transmitted the joy you felt after the magical meeting. Excellent work!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate it so much.
Comment from Violet WolfChild
I loved this! Everything flows together nicely, and the imagery is enchanting. I found myself lost in the melody of a gurgling stream and a relaxing flute. Exceptional job.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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I loved this! Everything flows together nicely, and the imagery is enchanting. I found myself lost in the melody of a gurgling stream and a relaxing flute. Exceptional job.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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I'm so glad you could visit it, too. Thank you for a delightful review.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, the place you hope to find again sounds delightful in verse. Lovely imagery throughout, and I love that font you have used. It's so pretty. I saw no errors and would recommend this lovely verse to others for review, cheers, Ana.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Hello, the place you hope to find again sounds delightful in verse. Lovely imagery throughout, and I love that font you have used. It's so pretty. I saw no errors and would recommend this lovely verse to others for review, cheers, Ana.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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I appreciate that! Thank you for the lovely comments.
Comment from mermaids
There is a strong feeling of fantasy in your words and the reader can feel the presence of the creature you encounter. This is an excellent poem of fantasy and takes the reader to another place.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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There is a strong feeling of fantasy in your words and the reader can feel the presence of the creature you encounter. This is an excellent poem of fantasy and takes the reader to another place.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you for saying that. Much appreciated.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-You have written a very good poem
using this style.
-The rhyme and imagery
are excellent, and you tell
a story that flows very well.
-It progresses well, too, as
you listen to this "haunting melody."
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-You have written a very good poem
using this style.
-The rhyme and imagery
are excellent, and you tell
a story that flows very well.
-It progresses well, too, as
you listen to this "haunting melody."
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Pam, for a lovely review. I'm so glad you like it.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Yvonne,
A magical poem, seems like the little fae flutist
inspired your muse, as well.
The form fits the theme perfectly
with its musicality
and your rhymes are superb
I think the fae is smiling in his forest
as he plays along with your words
Beautifully done
Robert
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Hello Yvonne,
A magical poem, seems like the little fae flutist
inspired your muse, as well.
The form fits the theme perfectly
with its musicality
and your rhymes are superb
I think the fae is smiling in his forest
as he plays along with your words
Beautifully done
Robert
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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I think so, too. Maybe someday, I can meet him for real. Wouldn't that be something to remember! Thank you for a lovely review.