Sully
A good and worthy human being.5 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Quite a commemoration to Sully and perhaps as Sully progresses to a none productive stage, you will consider carrying the torch that Sully posess. Its always good to be affiliated with a goid hearted person.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Quite a commemoration to Sully and perhaps as Sully progresses to a none productive stage, you will consider carrying the torch that Sully posess. Its always good to be affiliated with a goid hearted person.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much for your read, review and the great rating.
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My pjeasure
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My pleasure
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Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Such a sweet story and a heartfelt inspirational message. I'm a sucker for old people and especially ones like Sully who are involved in the Meals on Wheels program. Good luck to you in this contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Such a sweet story and a heartfelt inspirational message. I'm a sucker for old people and especially ones like Sully who are involved in the Meals on Wheels program. Good luck to you in this contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thanks much for the read and the review. He is a unique individual.
Comment from nor84
I wanted to give you a heads-up review. It appears you're missing this part of the rules:
The poem must have a rhyme scheme. It can be of any kind rhyme scheme that the poet chooses.The poet must involve his reader in any way that the poet wishes. But the poet must involve the reader directly within (a part of) the poem. The poem must contain a word count of not less than 200 words. And not more than 300 words.
I don't see a rhyme scheme, and poem has less than 200 words.
You may still have time to fix it. Good luck.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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I wanted to give you a heads-up review. It appears you're missing this part of the rules:
The poem must have a rhyme scheme. It can be of any kind rhyme scheme that the poet chooses.The poet must involve his reader in any way that the poet wishes. But the poet must involve the reader directly within (a part of) the poem. The poem must contain a word count of not less than 200 words. And not more than 300 words.
I don't see a rhyme scheme, and poem has less than 200 words.
You may still have time to fix it. Good luck.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Thanks for the heads-up. I will try to fix it.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, what a lovely tribute poem to Sully. I'm sure he'd love it and people like him are few and far between. Salt of the earth type folk. Thanks for sharing your story in a poem. Ana.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Hello, what a lovely tribute poem to Sully. I'm sure he'd love it and people like him are few and far between. Salt of the earth type folk. Thanks for sharing your story in a poem. Ana.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the read and the kind comments. You are correct, salt of the earth.
Comment from red6560
You have captured the "essence" of a good person. It is nice to hear about a man that gives so much in a confusing and violent world. You captured that in this poem. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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You have captured the "essence" of a good person. It is nice to hear about a man that gives so much in a confusing and violent world. You captured that in this poem. Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the read and the kind comments.
