What Gives Life Meaning?
Family ties...9 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Yes they are so cute and adorable when they get here we look into them little eyes and fall in love with them but as they grow older sometimes we have to step back because they try to tell us what to do we still love them but they get a little challenging as they get older because they have their own individuality and we as Parents try to shape them like we want them to be but they're their own individual and they let us know that early. So author enjoy the little beady eyes while you can while you can hold them and look in their little eyes and play with his little toes because once they start Walkin and talkin that will change. To different type of love with a sense of respect for who they have become
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Yes they are so cute and adorable when they get here we look into them little eyes and fall in love with them but as they grow older sometimes we have to step back because they try to tell us what to do we still love them but they get a little challenging as they get older because they have their own individuality and we as Parents try to shape them like we want them to be but they're their own individual and they let us know that early. So author enjoy the little beady eyes while you can while you can hold them and look in their little eyes and play with his little toes because once they start Walkin and talkin that will change. To different type of love with a sense of respect for who they have become
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you for such a great review..kids definitely keep you on your toes.
Comment from MissStone
This is adorable and oh so true!
The poem is vulnerable, sweet, simple, and powerful all at once.
The photo and background colour is very complimentary and brightens up the poem.
I love the line "with curious eyes filled up with trust" -Instantly very baby I've ever held popped into my mind, staring up at me with trusting eyes!
Great work of poetic-art!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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This is adorable and oh so true!
The poem is vulnerable, sweet, simple, and powerful all at once.
The photo and background colour is very complimentary and brightens up the poem.
I love the line "with curious eyes filled up with trust" -Instantly very baby I've ever held popped into my mind, staring up at me with trusting eyes!
Great work of poetic-art!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for this nice review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from R Lakshmi prabha
How true it is! Neither money nor success brings real happiness. We feel proud when we bring up children with love and care.Simple words, great expressions.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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How true it is! Neither money nor success brings real happiness. We feel proud when we bring up children with love and care.Simple words, great expressions.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Wow! Thank you for this great six star review, you really made my day. :)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love everything about this. You've done a superb job of informing and giving the reader a clear picture of what the meaning of life is to you. I enjoyed reading this well written poem. Very well done.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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I love everything about this. You've done a superb job of informing and giving the reader a clear picture of what the meaning of life is to you. I enjoyed reading this well written poem. Very well done.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review, I really appreciate it .thanks also for the six stars. It made my day. :)-
Comment from Wabigoon
Yes, very good and I agree but I do not agree on where that child comes from.
Noticed this:
(It) it the riches that we strive for? Certainly you mean "is?"
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Yes, very good and I agree but I do not agree on where that child comes from.
Noticed this:
(It) it the riches that we strive for? Certainly you mean "is?"
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank you for taking time to read and review, and for pointing out my error. I'm intrigued by what you mean as far as the child in the poem is mentioned. I would be interested in your viewpoint if you would care to share it. Thanks again.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent poem on the meaning of life
and a solid entry for the contest
with some nice rhymes and good rhythm.
But, of course, it is the message that life finds it meaning
in love between two and the love of each child.
Wonderful picture to match.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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This is an excellent poem on the meaning of life
and a solid entry for the contest
with some nice rhymes and good rhythm.
But, of course, it is the message that life finds it meaning
in love between two and the love of each child.
Wonderful picture to match.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Meaning of Life writing prompt.
Your verse is lovely but the picture that you have posted here steals the show.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Meaning of Life writing prompt.
Your verse is lovely but the picture that you have posted here steals the show.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much, I appreciate you taking time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Wetbelly01
I'd have to say, this is a great one for the contest.
I don't see any problems at all.
Your piece has a nice smooth flow and rhyme to it.
My compliments and Good Luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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I'd have to say, this is a great one for the contest.
I don't see any problems at all.
Your piece has a nice smooth flow and rhyme to it.
My compliments and Good Luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank you, I really appreciate that.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from apky
What a beautiful picture full of meaning and significance!
I love your poem, with the wonderful words that moves the reader. I particularly adored the lines below:
It's the love that touches our heart and soul, when someone makes our half a whole.
A tiny being that looks like us, with curious eyes filled up with trust.
This is what God meant our life to be.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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What a beautiful picture full of meaning and significance!
I love your poem, with the wonderful words that moves the reader. I particularly adored the lines below:
It's the love that touches our heart and soul, when someone makes our half a whole.
A tiny being that looks like us, with curious eyes filled up with trust.
This is what God meant our life to be.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank you for such a wonderful review, it means a lot.
