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Meaning of Life

rhyming quatrains

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Comment from BeasPeas
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Very nice. "Life is a day full of choices." So true. Sometimes people choose the wrong ones, but if we are on the beam, in tune, for our good we're smart enough to choose the right ones. Rhymed well and illustrated nicely. Marilyn

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
    Dear Marilyn, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Meaning of Life writing prompt.
Your story of the meaning of life being life is clear and well written within your verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    Dear Sharon, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Joan E.
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You took on a difficult task in trying to explain the meaning of life, but your descriptions were insightful and hopeful. Your rhymed couplets in these quatrains were appealing as well. Here's to the "gift"! Best wishes in the competition- Joan

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    Dear Joan, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
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Hello, beautiful poem that has been published so well. I like the content, and agree, life is full of wonder to share. I noticed no errors and best of luck with this work in the competition, Ana.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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    Dear Ana, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is an uplifting celebration of life and all it has to offer us. I love your views on life and the joys we all can share and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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    Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from RodG
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Such a simple definition of the meaning of life, and yet so truthful. Life is most meaningful, as you point out,when it includes the family we love and the blessings of the natural world around us.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
    Dear Rod, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from apky
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This is so true and your poem fulfills the requrements.

I particularly liked your second stanza:

Life is a new babe being born
A future enveloping this lovely morn
Life is a breath of fresh air
A gift we share

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
    Dear apky, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove