The Birth of Spring
a poem describing spring14 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
You did a great job on your first day of spring poem. I enjoyed your rhyming sequence and your descriptions of spring's attributes. Well done on this. It's an good one.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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You did a great job on your first day of spring poem. I enjoyed your rhyming sequence and your descriptions of spring's attributes. Well done on this. It's an good one.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Dear Sugarray77, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Well done, great rhyme and subject. I know so many are looking forward to spring, It has been a very hard winter for many. Poor things. I like it cool but not sub-zero and I'd hate to drive in snow. ={
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Well done, great rhyme and subject. I know so many are looking forward to spring, It has been a very hard winter for many. Poor things. I like it cool but not sub-zero and I'd hate to drive in snow. ={
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Dear Roxanna, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your verse is a lovely welcome to spring.
Well rhymed, well said.
I makes me wish spring would hurry up and get here. We're in for more snow this week.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Your verse is a lovely welcome to spring.
Well rhymed, well said.
I makes me wish spring would hurry up and get here. We're in for more snow this week.
Sharon
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Dear Sharon, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is such a wonderful poem describing the beauty of spring. This poem gives the reader anticipation of the coming of spring. I'd love to be looking down at it's coming from a mountain top. You did a great job and I enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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This is such a wonderful poem describing the beauty of spring. This poem gives the reader anticipation of the coming of spring. I'd love to be looking down at it's coming from a mountain top. You did a great job and I enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Dear Jeffrey, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and beautiful poem about today being the first day of spring. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work! I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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This is a very well written and beautiful poem about today being the first day of spring. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work! I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Blessings to you too! Donna
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the birth of Spring and how it makes us feel to see the first signs of Spring breaking through the melting snow and the warmer sun shining.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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A very well-written poem about the birth of Spring and how it makes us feel to see the first signs of Spring breaking through the melting snow and the warmer sun shining.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from frogbook
Great poem to help us start a wonderful season. Liked the image of watching it spread from a mountain top. Lovely presentation that brought the words to life.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Great poem to help us start a wonderful season. Liked the image of watching it spread from a mountain top. Lovely presentation that brought the words to life.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Dear frogbook, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from patcelaw
With the upcoming move I will be making. I might well be going right out of winter into summer and skip spring. I will move to the Phoenix area on May 3. Patricia
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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With the upcoming move I will be making. I might well be going right out of winter into summer and skip spring. I will move to the Phoenix area on May 3. Patricia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Dear patcelaw, Thank you for your comments and review. Good luck in your new move! I hope you still stay on the site. Dove
Comment from persevere
How I relate to your welcome of spring. The snow has disappeared and the daffodils have survived all except one which was weighed down by the cruel white blanket. I just think you need to re-write the fourth line of the second stanza to fit your rhyming scheme. My humble suggestion is ' Fertile soil, the sun a welcome sight'
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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How I relate to your welcome of spring. The snow has disappeared and the daffodils have survived all except one which was weighed down by the cruel white blanket. I just think you need to re-write the fourth line of the second stanza to fit your rhyming scheme. My humble suggestion is ' Fertile soil, the sun a welcome sight'
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Dear persevere, Thank you for your comments and suggestion and review. Dove
Comment from Henry King
This poem is an ode to Spring. Rhyme pattern is in couplets, except fourth line second verse. That line has internal, L, rhyme. There is good assonance throughout. The sensual stimulation is mainly visual, colors, with one aural, bird singing. There is good rhythm when the poem is said aloud.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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This poem is an ode to Spring. Rhyme pattern is in couplets, except fourth line second verse. That line has internal, L, rhyme. There is good assonance throughout. The sensual stimulation is mainly visual, colors, with one aural, bird singing. There is good rhythm when the poem is said aloud.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Dear Henry, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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you are welcome