Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your short poem. It flows well with a message of regret for carrying out a bad deed. Your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. Best wishes!

angel123

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I think most of us can relate to this conclusion--particularly thinking back to when we were young and impulsive! You certainly conveyed what a conscience does in very few words. Best wishes in the Short Poem contest- Joan

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018

Comment from beggarofroses

Excellent

I really enjoyed your poem. It makes you think of certain things in life that you may regret but in that moment, that is what you wanted. Good luck in the competition!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

What a profound short poem.
There is action and reaction all in fifteen cleverly crafted words.
If only these thought processes had worked in reverse the outcome may have been so different.
Thoughtful and clever.
Good luck in the contest.
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

Haha I like this poem, it's cute and fun and the picture of the kid matches perfectly how we feel after we do something we probably shouldn't. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018