Think and think again
a tetractys13 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Kamran, that is so true my sweet friend...it is what is in your heart...not others...very well written you...sorry I haven't been over...I am off and on the site now...trying to catch up on so many things...but will be back soon...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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HI Kamran, that is so true my sweet friend...it is what is in your heart...not others...very well written you...sorry I haven't been over...I am off and on the site now...trying to catch up on so many things...but will be back soon...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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I hope all's well with you my friend, appreciate your time and the kind review; please take care; thank you and God bless you.
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your so very welcome...always...love xxoo
Comment from angel123
Your short poem topic is interesting and your artwork choice enhances your message. It flows well with truth and I enjoyed reading it. Best wishes!
angel12
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Your short poem topic is interesting and your artwork choice enhances your message. It flows well with truth and I enjoyed reading it. Best wishes!
angel12
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Hello angel, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review; thank you very much.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
Your tetractys format and entry poem-
Think and think again
has a great message of how necessary it is to
deal with truth before the day dims!
I like that line.
Gert
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Hello author
Your tetractys format and entry poem-
Think and think again
has a great message of how necessary it is to
deal with truth before the day dims!
I like that line.
Gert
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Gert my friend, I am delighted that you like the write; I appreciate your visit and the kind review; thank you very much.
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You are welcome author
Gert
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for selecting the tetractys for your short poem, especially since we do not often see the form. I admired your rejecting "impulsive" behavior and focus on "truth". Your addition of the alliteration of "d's" is quite effective. Well done! Best wishes in the competition and have a productive new week- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Thank you for selecting the tetractys for your short poem, especially since we do not often see the form. I admired your rejecting "impulsive" behavior and focus on "truth". Your addition of the alliteration of "d's" is quite effective. Well done! Best wishes in the competition and have a productive new week- Joan
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Joan my friend, I am pleased to read your wonderful review and happy that you like it; I thank you very much.
Comment from jppoet
This is a succinct but sagacious poem, artfully crafted in the difficult tetracty syllabic rhyme scheme. I wish you luck and success in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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This is a succinct but sagacious poem, artfully crafted in the difficult tetracty syllabic rhyme scheme. I wish you luck and success in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Hello friend, I appreciate your time and am pleased that you like the write; thank you very much.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I applaud the sentiments expressed in botn the quote and poem.
Even when we try hard not to, or even think we don't, surely along comes the heart to show that we do care.
A very thoughtful poem to counterbalance the impulsiveness
Of the quote with the reality of the poem.
Well presented in tetracyts format and a fine contest entry.
Good luck.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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I applaud the sentiments expressed in botn the quote and poem.
Even when we try hard not to, or even think we don't, surely along comes the heart to show that we do care.
A very thoughtful poem to counterbalance the impulsiveness
Of the quote with the reality of the poem.
Well presented in tetracyts format and a fine contest entry.
Good luck.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Hello Shirley, I appreciate your visit and am glad that you lie the write; thank you very much.
Comment from Pamusart
This is a good entry for the contest. It does not have more than 20 syllables. Would have liked to see artist notes. Is the dim light of dusk a metaphor for end of life? So, we are talking about a spiritual awakening at death? Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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This is a good entry for the contest. It does not have more than 20 syllables. Would have liked to see artist notes. Is the dim light of dusk a metaphor for end of life? So, we are talking about a spiritual awakening at death? Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Hello Pam, I appreciate your wonderful, thoughtful review; thank you very much.
Comment from tfawcus
Very appropriate here in South Australia at the moment. We've just had our state elections. Exercising a thoughtful vote is one of the cornerstones of democracy.
It's easy to take a 'couldn't care less' attitude, and many do.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Very appropriate here in South Australia at the moment. We've just had our state elections. Exercising a thoughtful vote is one of the cornerstones of democracy.
It's easy to take a 'couldn't care less' attitude, and many do.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Hello my friend, I like your take on the poem and you are so correct; I appreciate your time and the thoughtful review; thank you very much.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the Short poem contest. With only fifteen syllables you have written a statement that brings into question the lack of care attitude in today's society. Facing what is good and living each day trying to better oneself and live life with honour is one that gets ignored by too many people and sets a very poor example to the younger generation. Great job and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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This is a good entry for the Short poem contest. With only fifteen syllables you have written a statement that brings into question the lack of care attitude in today's society. Facing what is good and living each day trying to better oneself and live life with honour is one that gets ignored by too many people and sets a very poor example to the younger generation. Great job and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Hello friend, I am pleased to read your wonderful/thoughtful comments; so glad you like the poem, thank you very much.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Short Poem writing prompt.
Your story of dealing with the truth is well written.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Short Poem writing prompt.
Your story of dealing with the truth is well written.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Hello Sharon, I am glad you like the poem; I thank you for your time and the encouraging review.