Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

LOL! This is funny and well done. Love the premise and we all know what happens in Vegas (is supposed to) stay in Vegas. A baby shrew to a bunny mommy throws that premise out the window. Marilyn

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Thanks, Marilyn, for the great review. Bill

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very cute story of this little bunny and being a mommy and her new baby
i like the artwork and it is so adorable. well written it was a pleasure
written by donette1914 on march 18th 2018

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018

Thanks, donette.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Ha,ha,ha. You are having such fun with the near sound of words. Shrew and screw. Is this an example of malapropism?
I think so. Clever near rhyme with Vegas and maybe.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018

Thanks, Shari, for giving this a look. He first shrew of malapropism is to never submit to their resistance. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Unfortunately not everything you do in Vegas stays in Vegas. Some things come out and continues to develop to the point where they cannot be hidden or denied. Look he's got your eyes and your nose. Oh God, now everybody knows, yep it's your kid alright.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018

A shrew-rabbit might turn out pretty cool.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Well I thought the last word might have been a different one but I'm sure you want to keep things PG-13. But then you ended up with a pun and bunny puns are fun even on St. Patty's Day.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018

I was accused of despoiling a cute children's painting. I guess I should have labeled this one.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

An extreme beautiful picture that complements your poem very well. Bunny got a new shrew baby, That will keep her very busy with the continuous feeding. Nobody will envy her.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018

Thanks, Ine

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

"What happens in Vegas obviously doesn't stay in Vegas" in the shrew world. You got in some good internal rhyme with new and shrew. You successfully carried out the tongue-in-check mood, and your fun pun with shrewed in the last line really capped off the entertainment. judi

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018

Thsnks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 17-Mar-2018

You're very welcome. judi

Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

Simplicity at its finest. The double meaning gave me a much needed chuckle to start the day. It sounded like a story at first. But, as i arrived at the end, I realized the comedy. Genius!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018

Thanks, Cy, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Well you obviously aren't quite finished with the shrew! lol. (Just read the reply you sent me) What's next? I loved this one, too. The shrew can turn anything into something totally different, just with the name, and you used that to your advantage. Well done, my friend.:) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018

Thanks, Sandra, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

The juxtaposition of an innocent child's room or nursery and a child's innocent toys against the double-entendres such as "she got shrewd" felt uncomfortable and seemed a lot of effort for a crude punchline.

You've likely met your goal--in my opinion this was on the tasteless side.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018

Thanks, Maureen, for giving this a look. Bill